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Someguy458


If it's labelled 'On Hiatus', just know that I'm still working on it!

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Sonic and company are in Equestria. Nopony there knows exactly how they got there, and they themselves don't remember, either.

Follow them as they experience this new world from their own unique perspectives, one character at a time (a la "Sonic Adventure 1").


Takes place just a few days after Season 4's "Filli Vanilli".

Note: Some parts will repeat across chapters when multiple characters experience the same thing, but the descriptions will be different, and I will do my best to add extra content/context depending on whose chapter it is.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 15 )

When will we see Sonic's story?

10569042
No promises, but I'm planning on having it come soon.

10571598
I am currently working on it, but it's turning out to be a much larger project than I anticipated, so it's a bit hard to find a good jumping-off point.

another good chapter, surprisingly you only missed one color change, “Tails nodded”

10632227
Thank you for pointing that out; it's fixed now.

Whilst it's not a rule, it's generally frowned upon on the sight to denote which character is speaking through the use of coloured text. It should be made clear through dialogue tags who is speaking. For instance;

The world slowly came back into focus as Tails regained consciousness. His body hurt like crazy, and he was too dazed to remember why. "Ugh, my head..." He groaned to himself as he tried to bring himself to his feet...

...only to find himself tumbling out of the tree he'd landed in. "Ow..." He groaned from his new position in a patch of flowers.

This time, when he uprighted himself, he made sure that he was on solid ground. He blinked the dizziness from his eyes, then froze when he realized where he was.

A forest. An overgrown, dark and foreboding forest.

The 8-year-old fox knew better than to freak out, but he couldn't help himself for a moment. "Wha- where am I? Hello? Anyone?!"

In this section, you repeatedly denote Tails' dialogue with the text in yellow. This is unnecesary, as we know who is speaking.

10917615
I honestly just like using colored text.

Well Shadow and Silver have appeared. Now it's Sonic's turn.

10969442
What about Amy? She's a main Hedgehog, and she hasn't appeared yet, either.

10969772
Forgot about her too. Heh woops.

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