• Published 2nd Dec 2020
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Worldbuilder - LilSlipsy



At the end of an immortal path someone from long ago might be able to help Twilight find her way. Her brother. Maybe he would help her find what she needed.

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Comments ( 4 )

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I have added two more chapter on this and expanded on what happens after. It's now meets the 5,000 word guideline. :twilightsmile:

10568080
Thanks for enjoying it! Hope the next two chapters will go over some of that.

Okay, I did not expect a continuation for this.
But I'm glad I was wrong.

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.


Also, if you want to reply to a previous comment make sure you put your reply in the same chapter as the comment you want to reply to.
Otherwise the author of the original comment won't receive an notification and most likely miss your reply.
(That's most likely the reason no one reacted to 10596770.)

Wow, for the first time in 8 years of reading pony fics, I have absolultely no idea how to react to or analyze a story. That is impressive.

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Thanks for the input, I tried sending another reply to see if it works. And I'm also glad you enjoyed the continuation of this! :twilightsmile:

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Well hopefully that's a positive reaction, because I'm not sure how I should react to this comment. Thanks? :twilightsheepish:

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