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Wonderful to see this expanded. Should make for quite the journey. I don't have much to say about the opening, but I look forward to seeing how you handle the rest.
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Thank you! Hopefully I do not disappoint. I've already got more of a coherent story to tell here (a smut driven one, but a story all the same). Already what I have so far is longer than the entirety of the original.
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I kind of hope we get a story about somebody else finding this island just because I want somebody to be like holy s*** this is real
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Hehehe, we'll see~
It's almost too convenient. But I'm sure there's nothing to worry about.
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Definitely nothing amiss here!
And so it begins. Filling someone with life can have side effects if they run out of injuries...
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An astute observation! I actually hadn't thought of that angle. Worry not, I actually have something in mind for the plot here...
So this is a more detail version of your previous story. I first thought it would be the story from Gilda's POV and not a journal type report.
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Yeah apologies if this was misleading. The short description does say that this is a full rewrite of the previous story with much slower pacing and more detail. There's going to be many more sex scenes with a LOT more detail.
This is a much better narrative than the original.
Completely unrelated to the mystery whispers, of course.
I bet that watch was a G-Shock. I don't think any other watch can survive drifting at sea for a week or so.
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Thank you!
Some people consider crab's egg to be addictive. Actually, if crab is big enough, you can use its shell as a small pan.
It seems the island try to take care of its inhabitants while trying to influence them to match the image it want them to be.
It definitely works given the framing device. Gilda isn't going to write an entire bodice ripper in her dream journal.
Consider this is a journal, your narrative sounded proper and natural.
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Great!
Gilda always strikes me as the gruff tomboy type who keeps her words frank and concise. No flowery language for her. Yet, at least...
Ancient civilization? Sounds like something both Twilight or Daring Do would enjoy exploring.
Hints of something deeper. Most intriguing...
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ohhh, she would enjoy it all right....
Griffon use spear? I guess this anthro world is close to human shape than feral one.
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Well yeah, hence why this is an anthro MLP story. Give it time though, and maybe Gilda won't be needing a spear in the future
Growth requires calories, and the island likes 'em big...
Bill Cipher, that you buddy?
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HA! I never thought of that. Now I can't unthink it.
Been playing a lot of Destiny 2 and the minute I saw this, my mind instantly went to the Pyramid Ships.
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I'm sure whatever she forgot couldn't be too important. Otherwise, she wouldn't have forgotten it.
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True!
welp she's too far gone now
prepare for nuclear bombardment
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oh, that is bullshit, you have no idea how many times I have forgotten something SUPER important
Most intriguing. And hey, best to encourage the eldritch entities who don't immeiately make your brain ooze out through your ears.
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So have I. It was meant as a joke.
So something clearly has been guiding Gilda. Let's see either she ended up corrupted, possessed, or became a vassel?
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In due time, my greenish friend. In due time you'll see.
Fleetfoot? How the heck did Gilda know her?
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Not Fleetfoot. A random OC. I completely forgot about her.
"Did I mention the pony wasn't Rainbow Dash? Because she definitely wasn't."
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Precisely!
Forgetting the name of her hometown. Definitely not a warning sign or anything. And I do appreciate acknowledging that sticking indeterminately old artifacts in assorted orifices isn't the most hygenic thing you can do with them.
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I am but a simple dragon. I see a lamp without a shade, I hang one up.
This island sounds more and more like a paradise for a horny hen. It even comes with equipment.
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Perhaps...
I really want to read Dash's pov while she reads what gilda writes
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In due time, dear reader~
It's honestly kind of touching that her memories of Rainbow have stayed this sharp this long.
Surprised me that she didn't recall the pink maniac who pranked her. Most encounters with Pinkie tended to be imprinted into the mind of the survivors.
can someone get a boat full of horny teens here?
it seems like she really needs some dong
If these are effects of the island on usual being, I shudder to think what would happen if Cadance manage to land here.