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Vis-a-Viscera

Now witness the power of this filly armed and operational battlestation.

Vis-a-Viscera Joined 28th Apr, 2020 · Offline

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zachary12
zachary12 #1 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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nice work

Starlight Nova
Starlight Nova #2 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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Reviewing credit goes to ArDee.

What do you mean by that?

Vis-a-Viscera
Vis-a-Viscera #3 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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11592564
That ArDee helped me look over, edit, and correct the fic.

Bobathan
Bobathan #5 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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11592555
yo is that actually you lololololol wtf

Turbotune
Turbotune #7 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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I have to say the conversation at the start confused me a bit, but the story was quite nice and hot!
And don't take this the wrong way, but you spelled the characters' names wrong a couple of times…

Gilda’s back hit the store’s counter, her wings thrashing at the impact as they knocked rocks of headphones off the edges. Spitfire was on her in an instant, her hands finally gripping onto denim belt loops and pulling until Gilda was freed of her jeans. Once done, it only took a few seconds for Gildda to pry the sopping wet thong from between her legs, miraculously not breaking the straps in her paw as she was sliding it down her impossibly long limbs.

Extra "d" in "Gilda", and…

With a grin spread so wide she thought its tips would scratch the ceilings, Gilda rolled her hips ecstatically against Spitifr’es fat dick. It bashed against her G-spot without end, and Spitfire soon treated her mouth to the same plowing, swooping down to suck the soul from her with a final kiss. Their bodies bucked and flopped against each other, all thoughts of restraint or composure as busted as the record player still hanging on the counter’s edge. Best of all, Gilda finally felt Spitfire’s head push open the entrance to her womb, locking in as Gilda’s cunt was finally plugged shut with cockmeat.

"Spitfire" with a " ' " inside and an "i" missing.
Thanks for the tale:twilightsmile:

KMCA
KMCA #8 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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11592846
For a time my nickname at work was Frodo. I found the "One cupcake to rule them all" shirt and almost killed a coworker wearing it. I think he almost pissed himself. Well worth it.

Some people, they just lack a sense of humour and take themselves too seriously.

Vis-a-Viscera
Vis-a-Viscera #9 · May 25th, 2023 · · ·
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Ooooh, thanks, man. Knocked out those corrections real quick.

tamales
tamales #10 · May 28th, 2023 · · ·
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loved this 😊🩷

Khanathara
Khanathara #11 · May 28th, 2023 · · ·
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Best of all, Gilda finally felt Spitfire’s head push open the entrance to her womb, locking in as Gilda’s cunt was finally plugged shut with cockmeat.

Wait, when did they switch back to vaginal from anal? Did I miss something or was that just skipped over?

Vis-a-Viscera
Vis-a-Viscera #12 · May 29th, 2023 · · ·
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11595408
Actualy, I didn't elaborate it enough, but Spitfire does switch from anal to vaginal when she's rolling Gilda on her front on the counter. I think I've made it more obvious now.

Khanathara
Khanathara #13 · May 29th, 2023 · · ·
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Ah, ok. When I first read it I was confused/curious.

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