• Member Since 28th Jul, 2014
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Perpetually melancholic.

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After an afternoon of soccer, Rainbow Dash and I head home, but lately, people have been giving us weird looks.

Oh well. It's just another day with Rainbow Dash.

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Comments ( 6 )

So far, intresting!

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Sorry, forgot to mark as complete! This was originally only a one-off writing exercise, but maybe I'll come back.

What was with the 'death' tag? I didn't see anything remotely mentioned in there

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Correct, death isn't explicitly mentioned, but the intended idea when writing the story is that Rainbow Dash is dead. However, I wanted to depict it from the perspective of the other character, Spirit Chaser, who can see the dead (or is pretending she's still alive by manifesting a vision of her). Essentially, he has no idea that she's dead because, to him, there is no difference. The revelation is certainly not as developed as I would have liked, and considering the time limit I set for myself, there is definitely room for improvement.

Regardless, thanks for reading.

"See you around, Spirit Chaser."

Omg, I did not expect that.

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