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Twisted-Tail


I wanted to try writing dragon stories, but I write fetish stuff instead.

Comments ( 14 )

Ooooo this was delicious!!!! I love expansions and mind control fics! Plz keep going!

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There is another chapter ready, I just want to read it a couple of more times and remove any obvious errors

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Ok, your doing a great job here, looking forward to more! Hope boobs, butts, and guts grow big. Wonder if her mind will be adjusted so that her new assets have always been there. Big freakouts are a turnoff for me.

So So Sweet!!!! Twi getting fatter and the conditioning grows, so she's clearly sucking out magic, and twisting her will.

Very nice, I enjoyed it!

I think this was a typo: “The moments of this organism was like an eternity for Twilight”.

I like this story so far, made me realize I read something like this but that story was abandoned or something long ago. A Succupony story or something like that was... Can't wait to see more of this. :)
Really like a good Twilight mind controlled story.

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It wouldn't happen to be a story called 'Lilith' would it?

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Now that you mention it seems like that it was.. I really like(d) that story, it is a shame it never got updated recently.
I'm not saying your story is copying that, just made me remember things from Lilith. :)
As I said, looking forward to read more.
P.S.: I read your blog about the subject so I understand it now, but the main point is that I can read two great mind control story so I'm happy about that.

So what is going to happen in the next chapter?

I'm going the be honest here, didn't see this line coming, seeing Angel Grace's idea with Lilith, I thought about a possible transformation chapter to turn Twi into one of them, but it wasn't a bad idea as well, just unexpected.

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Sorry to disappoint you. I just wanted to do a short self-contained tale that avoided Twilight's friends and the other princesses rescuing her. The Demons aren't planning world domination; they're just trying to survive and remain unknown by the anyone else.

I hope Twilight walks away from this happy and pregnant. As well as Lillith and Eros becoming Twilight's mates and protectors of the foal Eros impregnates her with

Is there going to be a sequel?

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