A Kitsune swordman wondering around Equestrian and beyond, having much tales to tell...
Equestrian Astronaut Sandbar, Hippogriffia/Seaquestrian Astronaut Silverstream, and the Griffonian Astronaut Gallus; handpicked by Princess Twilight Sparkle herself, will be the three first non-alicorn to set hooves/feet on their satellite Moon.
"SPACE TRIP!!!" ---- Silverstream
"Let's get this fired up!" ----- Gallus
"One small step for a pony, one giant leap for the Equestrians." ----- Sandbar
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awesome story my friend
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Thanks, the next one will be focusing on the Voyager probes.
I changed a bit
Very good.
I can't help but think that the spacecraft should have been called "Luna 11", while the rocket should have been named "Celestia V"
Looking forward to see more of this Equestrian Space Program!
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Well, in real life it's called Apollo 11, Apollo is the sun god, and Celestia is the sun princess, get it? My friend?
I really like the story, and the idea of more Equestrians going to moon. My only critique is some of the sentences change tense. For example; when you talk about the command center you use past tense “announced”. And then you talk about the crowd like “squeaks, etc” words in present tense. I do not know if this is just me being bad at writing tenses (which I am), but is this change intentional? (I am not good enough at this skill to tell you how to fix it if not intentional, sadly, but hopefully I brought something to your attention that you may look into). All that aside, I look forward to the sequel!