To the author - Finished reading this on saturday (October 31st) around 5:48 pm.
i never read any stories based in this universe nor barely read mlp Grimdark fics but seeing your take on it interested me...Thank you for turning a not so liked fic into one with having more depth & reasonable!

Interesting read, could use a sequel.

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I'm actually thinking about making one. I just need to put some ideas together first.

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Sound's good!

While the original had too many gore, your reimagening needs more of it. Not gore tbh, but more deaths and cool ways to do them. Thats why i'm a Saw fan, to see if they survive or not. Really, have cheerilee kill two or three more children and you've had the best one yet. Also, being dropped in this AU without warning was a dizzy. Complains aside, it was super fun reading this, personality is on point and cheerilee doesnt scream 'i dont know what mental illness means' type edgy. Solid 8/10.