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HeatseekerX51


IT'S OKAY TO BE MECHANICAL.

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This story is a sequel to Path of the Unforgiven


-Equestria is beset by a grand conspiracy when a secret cabal seeks to overthrow the rule of the Alicorns. In doing so, they unleash a monster that threatens to cover the land in perpetual fear and darkness.
-In the wake of the defeat of Queen Chrysalis, Æclypse the Unforgiven, exiled prince of the ancient Kingdom of Thule is unmasked by Twilight Sparkle. But how could this be? Divided between his true identity and the persona of 'Wanderlust' that has come to define his life, can the unicorn come to terms with who he really is?
-Unnerved by a letter left behind for her at the scene of a theft, a sense of dread stalks Princess Celestia through the halls of Canterlot. A trauma thought put behind her rising from the shadows of her memory.
-Can Twilight, her friends, and the exiled prince of ancient Thule save Equestria from a nightmarish future?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

I'm intrigued. Can't wait for the next chapter!

What did you make the first chapter so long? Will the rest of the chapters be this long?

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It's just how it came out. I did not plan on splitting the 1st chapter, and I didn't feel like there was a strong enough story-beat to support a partition. And I do not intend the other chapters to be near as long. I totally understand how exhausting it might be for some.

..... swwEEET JAYSUS BOY! :twilightoops: I've heard about gettin' it all out but... But come on! There are at least 5 chapters in this single well... Chapter! :rainbowlaugh: Ah well, still fun, still quality. Keep up the good work and I'm eager to see where this goes!

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I know, I know...:twilightsheepish: I debated splitting this up for weeks. Ultimately the decision came down to what story moment I wanted to build to, and leave off at the end of the 1st chapter. I didn't think there were enough plot beats to support a quality partition of the word count. Most of the chapter is characters just talking, walking around, and playing with subtext. If there were more meaty bits, then it would have been split.
I also didn't want to disrupt the sequence of "Some Kind of Monster" & "This Monster Lives" chapter titles.
Believe me, I know it's tough. I read through it four times in the proofing/editing phases. I certainly DON'T want this to be the process for every chapter, this was exhausting enough. I like to think of it as a double-episode season premier.

But I'm glad you think it was worth your time, reader's approval is my greatest reward. It'll be a little bit before I start on chapter 2, as I go to work on my Godzilla/Marvel stuff for a while (I should have something published for that this month). But there is a ton more down the pike for Dark Days, and what I think is a really killer first arc.
~see you then.

Sweet Jeebus... YOU'RE ALIVE!! Oh thank heavens. I've been waiting for this story to update!

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Contrary to popular opinion, i am still alive, yes. Glad to have you back.

... Well I got thrown for a bit of a loop at the beginning there. Spot on with my two favorite Robots though!

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Oh, I've been wanting to bring them in for a while. Almost decided to hold off on them until the next Unforgiven.

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