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i like the story but "Rainbow Dash" don't you mean Rarity... unless you wanted to go for something different, then the story is kool
...what? Are they humanized? What's even happening? It just starts out with sex n' stuff. There doesn't seem to be any particular direction to this story. Which is crucial when starting a story. At least leave us an inkling of what's to come is what I'm trying to say.
Nope, I'm out of here.
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1175652 I got to agree with him, tihs is confusing and really an odd read....nonethless I will continue reading because I like Spike with both pairings (more so Spilight as it's my favorite) make sure though to seprate certain pergraphs for it seemed crammed together which really ruins the story.....also, you have an error that says her hands instead of hooves......WWWWHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! I am liking this story, you need any help, ideas or advice I got your back..peace and I'm loving the Princess's sense of humor.
Like the pairing but don't like the execution of how it is being told.
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Kewl!
Great job, nevertheless the ending got choppy as compared to the beginning where you had such detail. Hope to see an update soon, can't find a reason someone would down vote this... No I can see it.
1502001 No problems, man! Just follow me, or watch me, so I know how many people really want to see this new expansion to the story
revive this