yee! new chapter. I really like where this has gone so far.

the only advice I could give you is that the jump between perspectives when writing in first person is sometimes hard to deal with? so if you're in one scene try not to jump back too quickly. also putting a character name at the top of a break where we jump perspectives would be nice.

gets better and better this story does. I know I wouldn't care how long a new chapter takes, that's why there is more than just this story on fimfiction XD. Hopefully life takes a break at throwing you curve balls.

This whole story has been some fabulous hard scifi and I just keep coming back to see if there is more.

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OOF. This has literally been my policy on other chapters and I forgot. Fixing

Ooh we're finally getting close to the really good stuff. Eagerly awaiting contact!

still alive?

i love this can you make more?

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I need to get back to it. I'm going back to regular employment this month. Hopefully that means I can return focus to this website.

I just found this story but i really enjoyed what you’ve written, I know you haven’t gotten back to it for over 2 years but if you ever find inspiration again I’m tracking this story just in case!

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finishing things I start has been something I’ve struggled with. I am seeking an adhd diagnosis. It might help. I do hope to return to this. Maybe I can finish editing the three chapters already written soon.