• Published 15th Sep 2020
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Perpetual Torment - NiceMouse



You find yourself back in your homeland of Equestria, having been pulled away so many millennia ago. While your heart is telling you to reunite with your soulmate Celestia, could you live with yourself if you abandon planet Earth in its time of need?

Comments ( 13 )

Did a chapter disappear? Feels like it

Oh hell yeah, I love this story. Second person DoomguyxCelestia works so well. This chapter was really funny. The idea of this absolute chad striding around in a Celestia themed robe while getting gawked at by ponies is golden. I also like how they are taking it slow this time around instead of banging instantly. And I hope that if they do shag again that we get to see it. Missed an opportunity to write the bath scene, I love reading about humans tending to ponies. Can't wait for the next chapter, however long it might take :trollestia:

Lotta lovydoviness around, I cant help but put my shields up and wait for the surprise attack that kills one of them off or something.

I read the chapters before with the way he revealed himself and I agree that the way this one went is much better. I had no issues with the ones before but I feel these give a bit more depth. Well done.

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Several chapters were erased and redone a few months ago as the author didn't like the way it went. Personally I like the rewrite better.
There's more info in the blog post https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/947770/overdue-update

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Ah, i see. Thank you c:

Nice to know that you're back!

Imagine Rarity's reaction when she finds out Anon is Celestia's fiancé, she would go nuts. A perfect love story in her book.
Twilight on the other hand, would go crazy too. She would go "What?! Our social hierarchy, currency and a part of our culture and traditions are influenced by humans?! This is a groundbreaking discovery! Why wasn't I'm told about this?" as she is scribbling away her notes.
Only to find that everything she wrote about humans disappear.

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That would honestly be hilarious lol

Well I pulled an all nighter to read all this

Really hoping this doesn't go into the pile of fics I sleep deprive myself to read only to never get updated

Cancelled... rip.

RIP, hope things go well for the author. Beautiful story though.

Mate, there's no simple way for me to describe how much I liked this story. Please revive it! It's too good to be canned like this!

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