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The Loner


The world of fantasy is where I feel at home, where I can write whatever I want and not feel judged by the world

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If I have any details wrong about Darksiders, just let me know through PM

*After reading this first chapter, that reveals this intergalactic conspiracy against Equestria*?????!!!!!!

Ok, what the actual f***?????!!!!! 😵

Panoptos smiles as one of the few minor specs of corruption he harvested from Nightmare Moon start to take affect finally and says, "I was wondering if those seeds of corruption I planted were ever going to take root, now it will be just a matter of time before I must make my next move." He chuckles at having secretly betrayed Discord and placed them within a small handful of ponies that would succumb to their effects after some time passed, hoping they would eventually take root. He watches in delight as the young Alicorn's life gets more and more troubled, then sets out to begin the next part of his plan and makes his way to report his disturbing findings to his masters.

I want him to die.

Before Discord can turn his head and look at the crow, a large swarm of hundreds of crows shows up out of nowhere. They swarm over where the single crow is and start making a racket with their constant cawing, before going silent after a few seconds and start merging into a single form that is nearly bald having a outfit seemingly made out of black crow feathers and pale skin, and stands on two legs as they say with an elderly voice saying, "You are quite perceptive for a young one, no need to fear me child. I am known as the Crowfather, but I mean you no harm. I am a keeper of secrets and have seen what is to come, so fear not...all will be as it should. Fare thee well on this adventure, be sure to tell no one that you saw me or even mention my name at all." He then disappears as the flock of crows swarm over him and take him away to his home.

What is he talking about?

Equis sharply says, "SHHH!!! Didn't you hear what was said, everything will work out as long as we keep his presence quiet." then removes her hoof and sets it back on the ground.

But, should you trust him?

Death looks at Equus and Discord a moment before turning to look in the mirror and sees his new look, seeing the wings and says, "What are you two creatures? I have been to several different worlds and have seen a great many things, but nothing compares to how you two look. How do I use these...wings on my sides?"

Doesn’t he already know?

The draconequus nods and snaps his fingers to send them back then makes his way over to Equis and pulls her into a hug saying, "Don't feel so bad, he shouldn't have confronted you and spoke to you that way. It was not very friendly of him, perhaps some time in Equestria among the ponies will be good for him."

Is this really discord?

Panoptos continues to chuckle in amusement and says, "It seems to me that you have no clue what hunger is, so I shall fill you in. Ponies in this world eat fruits, vegetables, and plants. When they are thirsty, they drink several different beverages such as water, cider, milk, and other drinks made from herbs and ingredients much like how the humans did before the apocalypse happened. That grumble you just heard, came from your stomach. If you ignore it, it will grow louder or will consume some of your body mass to satisfy it for a time. I would recommend that you spend some time grazing on the grass around you since there are no restaurants nearby, or if you would want to be more civilized you could have Dust look for a place that has food."

Did they do something to the humans?

Discord chuckles and miniaturizes himself, then appears beside Death and says, "I do apologize for forgetting about that, allow me to correct that mistake." and snaps his fingers, making a black pair of saddlebags appear on his back near his flanks then says, "There, now you will blend in better with the other ponies that wear saddlebags. Do be cautious around Pinkie Pie, she is unpredictable and smarter than she looks. So if you see a pink pony and she happens to say something completely out there that happens to be true about you, play it off like she is joking to keep your cover. Well, that is all I can do for you right now, so ta-ta for now!" then snaps his fingers and disappears in a puff of smoke.

Is discord a villain?

He thinks about it for a moment and asks the watcher, ' The most efficient way to gather information is through the assistance of the locals ' He rubs a finger along the chin of his mask for a few more moments before saying, "Very well then, I shall accompany you into the forest that you fear, so lead the way princess."

Fingers? Twilight doesn’t see that?

Twilight's ears fall back as she feels sad about their situation and says, "I should not have let my friends convince me to leave them because it was too dangerous."

Is this a prequel?

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nice catch with those mistakes Pete, thanks. I was thinking of Grand Theft auto SA lol.

There, now it is fixed lol.

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the fingers part and the part about the body consuming mass, I removed that part.

There you all go, a new chapter telling more of Death's adventures in Equestria! If there are any inconsistencies or issues, let me know and I will deal with them.

Is this supposed to be before or after they killed the human? Also, do they not find him suspicious at all?

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Im in the same... Is this before or after and what is the connection with the prequel?

My bad, this takes place a little bit before the prequel, mostly following Death's journeys in Equestria. It will catch up to where the prequel left off though, I just want to do some backfilling.

Rarity is the first one to speak saying, "I must say that you weren't very nice to our dear Twilight, that doesn't make for a good first impression darling. You shall have to try harder if you wish to make up for it. Where are you from, I don't recognize you from Ponyville?"

Rarity: I know you went off to fight more of those plants saving her life, but that isn't good enough for your minor rudeness and you need to make up for it.
Death: I am so going to enjoy bringing ruin into this world.

Ah I enjoy a story where the ponies fuck up every now and then, can’t wait tell Bitchlight gets what’s coming to her. Anyways I hope to see more soon.

Here you all go, sorry it took so long. I have to be in a dark/evil mood to work on this story.

The watcher stays hidden in the shadow, grinning as he refines his plan and mentally says, ' Well, I would have to subtlely attach myself to them and infiltrate their thoughts, then plant a few bad thoughts along with some of the corruption I harvested. What do you say to that? '

Is that how the corruption works or is that how it begins?

Panoptos has an even easier time getting into her mind as he begins searching them for a way to influence them down a different path when he finds what he has been searching for with her dream of searching for her one true love, then decides to mimic her voice and pose as her conscience softly saying, "If you say yes, you won't be able to search for your one true love if he is not the one. However, there is something that is off...why is he proposing so soon? It might be a good idea to find out why before you say 'I do' or you could end up regretting not learning it sooner..."

So it’s less of corruption and more of influence?

(Seven) Death stands near the back of the crowd as he watches the stage when the guards at the horns start to announce the arrival of royalty, followed by a speech from Princess Celestia about celebrating the Summer Sun as her sister's return instead of Nightmare Moon's defeat. He then watches Luna fly into the sky and hover before a large crescent moon on a tall stand while beginning to lower the moon, followed by her sister joining her in the air and hovering before her own emblem as she starts to raise the sun. He then watches as a lavender streak takes off from behind the stage and uses magic to create a burst of light shaped like a star when the sun and moon are side by side for a brief moment, making him smirk behind his mask muttering, "Nice show using your magic like that, perhaps I could do the same when the time is right..."

How would that even be possible?

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They both play a part, corruption makes it easier to influence their thoughts. As for that last part, you will find out in the next chapter.

Just to warn you beforehand, the following chapters will have an occasional seriously dark twist to it which will be marked in violet instead of red to save the strain on your eyes...in fact, I shall change all NSFW (Not Safe For Work) chapters in this story to that color.

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You're welcome, was hoping to get more people to read this but I posted it so late at night...ugh lol

Do we have a long way to go? Before eventually, the ponies gets what's coming to them?

Getting their well-deserved consequence, and all that.

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ehh...a decade or so, but I will be doing some timeskips to get to the part everyone is waiting on.

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A decade!? Why forced Death ( Along with War, Fury, and Strife ) to wait that long? I'm eager to avenge Carl.

( Speaking about him. Where is he? I know he died, rather pathetically. But considering that Darksiders deals with Hell, Heaven, and the afterlife. I want to know where Carl's soul is? Plus, what is his answer to this question? Would you rather serve in heaven, or rule in Hell?

You know what I'm talking about. :pinkiecrazy: )

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Yes, Carl! That's what I meant.

I'm keep getting the "undeserving imprisoned/tortured/framed/falsely accused" main human character's names wrong. So many cliche stories where this mess up dark/edgy stuff happens to the human characters. And the chosen prosecutors ( The ponies for example. ) are being out-of-character bastards, more disgustingly racist/xenophobic, and incompetent morons.

This is more in-line with the Canterlot Wedding, Anon-A-Miss, and banishment/exile of a chosen pony character story tropes.

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lol it's alright, I will tell why they are acting that way in the sequel.

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Still want to see karma on everypony.

And the Four Horsemen will gladly had a hand in their well deserved destruction. Plus, Carl will probably come back as a vengeful Darksider's "super final boss". :pinkiecrazy:

Sorry it took so long to get this chapter finished, It is tough to write chapters for this story when I am not in a dark and sadistic mood.

I few weeks have passed, and another chapter is released! I hope you all enjoy it.

Hi, it's me. I'm finally come back to look at your stories.

And I can't wait to see the progress of this Darksiders crossover. I really hope Death and his brethren finally stopped dicking around and bring full retribution on the pony race for their terrible actions.

*This is before I read the two colorful "warning" sentences/paragraphs*

So what's up with the Red and Orange Tags?

Oh, is Death, or War, Strife or even Fury finally going to come and punish the disgusting ponies once and for all!?


**AFTER reading the RED and ORANGE TAGS**


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I just lost all hope for this story, and I thought you were better than THIS!? :pinkiesick:

Edit: Do Not look into this until you read my previous comment first, and react to that. :ajbemused:


The princess watches the door close and then dispels the protection shield she cast and replaces it with the proper one with an annoyed huff toward seven and saying, "Thank you for that lovely little death experience, if you hadn't warned us against strange doors, I might have moved to the afterlife. If I had actually died, you would be in a world of trouble dear!"

What the f**k would your pathetic soul gonna do to one of the most powerful beings that can eat souls like you for breakfast, lunch, and dinner!!!???

Because NO NORMAL PONY can just bring back the dead willy nilly like that!!?? Unless they're secretly a necromancer/lich, or something far worse. Like I don't know; The literal representation of DEATH!!!!

How the heck containers or even that super psychotic slut of a guard not see the red flags!!??


With an annoyed sigh, the horseman then tosses him into the air with one hand saying, "So be it, I guess you love pain." then twirls his scythe around behind his back stylistically and then prepares to carve the first piece off of his face when he hears a feminine voice say into his mind, "PLEASE DON'T KILL HIM OR I WON'T FINISH THE SEAL!" The voice clearly belongs to Equis, which causes him to growl angrily and use the end of the spear to strike him. Using the various blunt places on the spear to keep him in the air, he hits him between the legs as hard as he can to send him careening up toward the ceiling while holding his family jewels and puking his guts out. Swiftly spinning around to his left, he holds his scythe by the very end with the blade facing to the right and sees Tirek almost to the floor. Bringing his scythe back like a baseball bat, he maintains his counter-clockwise spin and bellows, "NOW....BEGONE!" while smacking him dead center in the chest with the very back of the blade near the end of the shaft.

He coughs up blood from the brutal strike and feels his sternum crack in several places when he slams through several walls before finding himself sailing through the air, eventually crashing into the ground and skidding to a stop with his mouth completely full of dirt and rocks.

Death (Seven) looks at Discord and huffs with annoyance, shifting from his reaper form back into his humanoid form saying, "If this plan fails because of your stupidity, you will answer to me for it. Now begone from my sight."

Discord nods hastily and darts away, leaving a brown brick on the floor where he hovered. Quickly looking for where Tirek landed, he follows a long skid trail to find him back on his feet walking oddly and sniffling. He approaches him cautiously and says, "Well it is good you survived, now how will we get more power?"

Forcing himself to ignore the nearly crippling pain from his balls, he looks at him and asks, "What was that image of another alicorn, was that supposed to be funny!?"

After telling Tirek about Twilight and her friends, they make their way towards Ponyville to draw her out.

Death huffs in irritation at Equis's meddling as he makes his way out of the castle to a spot outside the city, making his way down the mountain the slow way to maintain his energy. He stops along the path a couple of hours later to see a grand battle of power somewhere near the badlands, but slowly comes to a sudden stop. Remaining there and watching for a few minutes, he then sees Tirek towering over the trees below and using magic beams to destroy the forest with glee. Sighing, he says, "It appears that their grand plan had failed them, time for me to claim a soul..."

As he heads down to the ground, he sees a brightly shining sphere in the sky that attacks Tirek's large form with beams of lavender, pink, light blue, white, orange, and yellow. He watches as Tirek slowly gets smaller and asks, "What in the world is going on, what is that power?" When the sphere rises up higher and bursts apart, sending out a multicolored wave, he watches as he spots six ponies racing across the sky. With nothing better to do, he makes his way to where he last spotted Tirek.

Passing along the outskirts of Ponyville, he watches a rainbow suddenly streak through the sky and slam into the ground a few hundred yards from him. Spotting an object flying through the rainbow, he watches it sink into the ground as the ground starts to rumble and crack. Watching curiously as the point of a star rises towards the sky, followed by the rest of a large structure, he soon realizes that it is a castle and chuckles saying to Panoptos, 'Equis may have actually saved the plan...' He sees a flash on the path leading to the castle and sees the six friends standing in front of it suffused with a strange force, slowly returning to their previous appearances. He then spots the three princesses walking up the path behind them, giving a slight nod toward Princess Luna, who looks at him with a relieved smile. Blowing a kiss to her with his hoof, he then continues on his way to search for Tirek.

Or Carl himself finally shows up, becomes a literal super demonic/daemonic prince of all things, sees The Four Horsemen of all beings literally dicking around with the disgusting, hypocritical ponies!? And decides to do with all this himself.

And go get his just revenge on the Pony Race and Equestria as a whole.

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sorry, I'm a little confused here. I apologize that you don't like the story anymore, but there is a reason why I'm writing it this way as you will soon see.

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Edit: Now I'm finally done talking.

Sorry, I'm a little confused here.

Confused on what exactly? On the meaning of why I'm so pissed/upset on what I saw? I did mention that I read the red and orange sentences/paragraphs.

So, these are the obvious very big clues on why. Do you want me to be very more specific!?

Fine, I will give you clues on some details at the bottom now;

I apologize that you don't like the story anymore,

I already don't like the stories theme anyways, on the premise of what happened to poor Carl in the last story. We all know what truly happened.

Flurry was both a psychotic yandere slut with poor Carl that has no feelings with her for obvious reasons. And then she went suicidal, then her rather pathetic death is pin on Carl?

And due to some crazy and stupid coincidences, Carl was falsely guilty and brutally executed.

And after all that, the likes of the Mane Six or the Princesses don't give the benefit of the doubt, or find actual evidence instead of this kangaroo trial.

But nope, those hypocritical racist/xenophobic bitches don't freaking care about their first and now last human in their soil!?

And near the end, they didn't receive any negative karmic consequences of their sins against poor Carl!?

Besides, that the "harmony" tree and the elements gone totally "dead", but that's it.


The only good thing that gives me interest in this sequel, is the unique crossover from Darksiders and The Four Horsemen themselves.

Along learning with that tibbit, the potential of seeing Equestria with the high possibility of gonna get burned, due to bad karma to what they all did. :pinkiecrazy:

And you can obviously see that I really want the ponies to expose their hypocrisy, and make them all pay by having the Four Horsemen themselves pay them a visit. :pinkiecrazy:


Imagine my great displeasure, that instead of seeing the well-deserved divine retribution, I see literal Death, from Darksiders himself, literally dicking around with the "disgusting ponies" that he DID quote himself!?

Aren't you supposed to judge them punish them and take their souls?

Then why the heck is he "screwing" with them anyways!? Especially in rather f**k-up fetish ways!!??

I seen the tags on this story beforehand;

Why added the unnecessary sex of all things!? Or make it more disturbing with it!?

( When we all know that in the end, the ponies are going to die in a horrible but justifying manner, and their world will be apocalyptic? )


And doesn't that make Death totally out of character himself by f**king and being in a "relationship" with them!?

He is Death, and one of the Four Horsemen. I don't think he or even the likes of War, Strife, and Fury are the types to be in "romantic relationships".

And Death is NOT freaking Lust from the Seven Deadly Sins.

And Lust themselves ( Himself/Herself) in the Darksiders franchise isn't even that representative of the sexual part of Lust anyways!?

So why is Death doing this to himself, if his three "brethren" see this, they will rightfully be so disgusted with him.

And even then, The ponies themselves DON'T deserve the "pleasure", they deserve to suffer for what they did.


So why the heck having Death being in a "loving relationship" and even f**king with his own targets, that he clearly knows that he deeply despises, and will eventually take their souls to eternal suffering, be a part of the "grand plan"!!??


P.S. If you know or play The Hitman series? If yes, then you will know what I'm talking about.

Basically, it's like having agent 47 being with a "relationship" with one of his targets and is "bonking" with them!!??

This is essentially what you're doing to poor ole Death with these disgusting Ponies.

but there is a reason why I'm writing it this way as you will soon see.

Oh sure. :ajbemused:

This is literally the meme definition of "Your supposed to slay the Dragon, not lay with it/her"!!! :facehoof: :raritycry:

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I agree, but I am giving insight to the preparations that must be made by Death and Panoptos first as they lay the groundwork for the coming apocalypse. I promise they will get their asses butchered after a little story backfilling.

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I said I'm not done typing! :facehoof:

I agree, but I am giving insight to the preparations that must be made by Death and Panoptos first as they lay the groundwork for the coming apocalypse. I promise they will get their asses butchered after a little story backfilling.

Although, does that include Luna, Cadence, and that certain psychotic mare guard slut that "did it" with "Seven" ( Aka Death himself. )!? No exceptions after all.

This time, they are truly going to die, permanently! :pinkiecrazy:

To appease everyone's irritation with the story, I am going to summarize the events occurring through the years leading to the apocalypse. Will that cheer everyone up?

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Very surprised you want to do that?

Well, that is your choice, and nobody else seem as irritated like I do?

But I do want to know if you understand my example from The Hitman franchise, or my own opinion of how unusually OOC Darksider Death is being? It is bad enough with the ponies, but him too?

Him being a "romantic", despite what he is, what his profession is, and what he represents?

And it only got worse that he's in love and even has weird f**k-up versions of sex with the very same disgusting pony beings, that he's literally supposed to give judgment of at the apocalyptic deadline?


How would War, Strife and Fury feel about all this?

Speaking about them, where are they?

Did War already get falsely imprisoned? And the Earth sadly got annihilated already from the beginning of Darksiders 1?

Did Fury's story in Darksiders 3 already begun?


P.S. Is it just me, or is Flurry Heart somehow freaking alive, and did we go back in time to where season 4 finale happen with Tirek, what's going on?

If Flurry is somehow alive? Then where is Carl, why did he still have to die!!??

Did you make the four horsemen time travel to the past?

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sadly I don't understand it, and the ponies have rubbed off on him somewhat. I'm not sure how they would feel, skeptical, unsure, IDK. They haven't been summoned yet as this is a bit of a back story on how things got so fucked up from before Death even arrived, leading up to Carl's execution and the start of the apocalypse. This takes place way before Carl dies, but after Fury's story as she will be called away to deal with this.

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You don't understand the Hitman example. Fine, I will change it.

Can you at least tell me which franchises you know at least? And I will give give out a good example.


P.S. So Carl still freaking dies, even if Death was actually there!?

And I actually hope that when Flurry died, that she actually suffers the consequences for her very dumb yandere actions!!!!


P.S.S. Wait? This is after Darksiders 3? Do you remember what happened with the ending?

If you do, then why the heck is Fury still with the corrupt council, after what they tried to do to her!?

And you know what I mean. Since it seems like we both played the Darksiders games.

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ah, never played Darksiders 3, apologies.

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What?????

So are you telling me that you're doing a Darksiders crossover, without playing one of the main games!? And not know what happened with Fury during the 3rd game, and especially in the end!?


Did you even play the first two games or Genesis!?

I'm sorry, but I am speechless; :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof: :facehoof:



Here. This is the short explanation version of the full game telling Fury's story;

https://m.

This video showing the full boss fights of the 7 Deadly Sins, other Mini-Bosses, and VERY important cutscenes;

https://m.

And since you don't know this either, there's actually some hidden choices to change the ending. By choosing whose side you're really on or who to believe;

https://m.

And I don't care about spoilers, since this game has been out for years.

And unlike you regretfully, I did play this. You are missing out.

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the first two games, yes. No genesis. Looks like I have some editing to do

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Even though I didn't like what Death is doing with those unworthy ponies. I still think the story might be a little salvageable, just as long that the ponies finally get their karmic comeuppance.

And like I said, Death can't have any "favorites" with the likes of Luna, Cadence, and that crazy guard mare, once the "apocalyptic clock" ticks zero.

No exceptions! :pinkiecrazy:

P.S. So Carl still freaking dies, even if Death was actually there!?

And I actually hope that when Flurry died, that she actually suffers the consequences for her very dumb yandere actions!!!!

I realize that this hasn't been answered?


Anyways, I'm taking a small break from Fimfiction by doing important stuff in real life, and play my Sniper Elite Challenges.

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I have no plans to make her pay because in her defense, being repeatedly raped by her father and becoming pregnant with his child caused her to go insane, which warped her personality. The reason for that is that Panoptos planted a seed of corruption within her which took root and made her turn violent towards her heart's crush due to his inability to properly deal with her affections toward him. In short, she and him along with the other ponies were just pawns in a much bigger scheme.

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