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On my way back from the movies, I was mugged. Like the idiot I was, I chased him down and ended up getting shot. I woke up... but I shouldn’t have.
Upon waking up and finding himself in Equestria he tries his best to help the ponies and to earn their trust! While learning his place in his new life in an ever-expanding world!
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Why are we yelling!? No seriously, that's more exclamation points than any description needs.
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tbh im not very good with grammar and the edited description that fimfiction wanted me to make wasn't run past any of the betas for the story...
Shouldn't NightTalon be two words?
I'm enjoying the story pretty well I haven't down voted nor upvoted. Though dont try to rush things like in the 1st chapter to me it felt too rushed like you couldn't wait to get to the main story. Now it doesn't feel as badly rushed. Take your time bud though good job so far.
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Your right it is in this story... im just so used to writing it all as one word since NightTalon is a OC of mine who this OC is partly based off of...
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Trust me I am trying to take my time... the betas have heavily edited it from what I originally wrote cuz I had rushed it too much!
What is this a crossover of?
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mlp, jurassic world and riftverse (another fanfic series)... fimfic doesn't offer jurassic world as a crossover option...
Loving it
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thanks you should read the other fanfics in the series as well!
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Actually NightTalon could be written like that personally, it sounds fine and if you want you can write it as Night Talon.
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you will find that I tend to alternate between calling him talon and night talon in the story itself... but I havent really changed the title as I kinda wanna keep that one link to the OC that this night talon was originally based off...
still reading but, I think you might have messed up abit, if you go and edit the chapter you should probably read part of it to make sure you got it
Now That is interesting
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what part was it that I and the betas messed up?
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yes... it is hehehe
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The eagle, elder, was called both an him and she
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that is a mistake can you PM me where exactly please?
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Uhh, sure?
I just relised this was cancelled why was it cancelled?
Edit - nvm I just saw the blog post as well this saddenes me and I enjoyed it but that is okay you did the best you could. Though i enjoyed it thx for the story you made but saddely was canceles
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thanks for the comment and for enjoying it... I hope to someday revive it... but the chances of that happening are next to none... it saddened me greatly to cancel this story... but I couldnt work with the team any longer... I might post what I had of the next chapter as well as a deleted scene of an earlier chapter at some point but after that its likely this will never be worked on again... I am more focused on working on my interactive story than fanfiction nowadays anyway...
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That is alright though sometimes things like this happens though it was going good in my oppinion. So good job in my book. If you write anything by yourself I'll probebly see it. Im pretty active on this site daily
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thanks if you want to see my other works look me up on fanfic and deviantart or if you want to see the major project I am focusing all my effort on PM me and ill let ya know!
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Thx for the info
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no problem, its the same username and avatar!
I know it when i read gloden key
Just tp obvius
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hmm?
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The riftverse i have read it
Just that
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oh you did?
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I'm replying to this comment to get your attention directly, instead of having to wait for you to see it while browsing through the comments.
I would like to ask you to please provide a link to the story with that Glavenus character, as I would like to give it a read. Thank you.
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Yup and if i dont have the english like my mother language
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nice I hope you enjoyed the story so far!
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im very sorry to inform you that at this time spada is still just a side character and sadly nobody has wrote his story as of yet.
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Oh... well don't that just suck absolute butt. In the off chance that someone does make a story about him, Would You Kindly provide a link to it? And before you ask, yes, that was a Bioshock reference.
Thank you for your time, please have a wonderful day.
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yea I will let you know, though I highly recommend joining the riftverse discord server if your looking for such things...
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I'm not a very big fan of social media crap. Way too many accounts to keep track of, and I only have Facebook so I can get some bonuses in Mobile games. Thanks anyway.
Damn killing a side character before their one moment of relevance... that's pretty fucked up
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yea, but I wanted something very traumatic to toss at the peace loving ponies, also something to really set this world apart from the cannon show but not something that would radically change the entire timeline right off the bat. as far as I know, he only appears in 2 episodes so his death wouldnt have too big an impact on the timeline. Anyway, I hope you have enjoyed the story so far, things are happening behind the scenes that are sadly delaying the next chapter...
*dinovaldo intensifys*
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I am not sure what that means?
NOOOO!!!
How would Cranky react to his friends death???
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Not sure but it'll probably be a while before we see I am currently working on a rewrite, thx for the read tho hope you liked it!
update?
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I am slowly working on the first chapter of the rewrite, irl issues have prevented me from posting it however!
A Plainswalkers fic? Never thought I'd see one of those on here... Trial By Lightning fan I'm guessing?
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yep
Are you planning on re-writing this? I'm guessing with the "Old" in the title you are. If so I may wait till you start, to start reading
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yes I am rewriting this the first chapter of said rewrite is up!
Interesting, I think I will follow along with this one