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This is not that bad to be honest here have a like,follow and a derpy
I like it. Maybe its not perfect, but interesting and enjoyable. I can’t wait for next chapters.
This is okay but you definitely need an editor when you have lines like this
I'm not sure what to say about this one. You have a premise that could potentially be good, but your execution is very lacking. There's not much to hook the reader other than the basic premise, but it doesn't seem like you'll be writing any more of this anyway. On top of that, you have quite a few mechanical issues which probably could have used some additional proofreading.
Wow, been a while since you posted a chapter. I wonder what's the cause of Sunset's "Bootiful" dilema.