• Published 19th May 2020
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Discord's Doll - Nonya Beezewax



After Fluttershy's death, Discord hosts a dinner party and sleepover with the six, including a creepy doll of Fluttershy.

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Heyo! Here's part one, premiering tonight! https://youtu.be/rZ1SjvHJ89Y

Ah, I like how blatant Rainbow's dementia is. Sure, at first its "ooooo fluttershy is trapped in a doll oooo" but it gets so wonderfully dreamlike and obviously untrue.

Discord is not handling her death well, but he's not gone mad.

The way he copes with the doll was way less unhealthy then his seclusion and lack of self-care.

Wait, so it's all in rainbows head it did Discord actually drive her crazy?

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Sort of, yeah. Wasn't Discord's intention; just happened to trigger something in her head.:pinkiesmile:

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So she didn't really see discord abuse Fluttershy's spirit trapped in a doll, it was just a crazy dream? It's just her mind snapped because of the sight of the doll?

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So the CMC didn't really eat Fluttershy's corpse or get paid by Discord to kill her so that he'd trap her in a doll to abuse her? I'm confused.

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I thought it was schizophrenia. Especially since she's starting to see things that aren't there like Fluttershy.

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Yeah, that stuff in her dream was due to paranoia (it made her dream up those outlandish scenarios), and the stuff when she was awake was hallucinations. I tried to write it to make it obvious that it was paranoid schizophrenia, though I definitely could've made it more obvious in hindsight.

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Thanks for clarifying. Also I feel so bad for Discord. At least he has a way to cope with the loss that isn't too unhealthy. I hope there will be a sequel where Discord finally moves on and uses the doll to honor his wife's memory. It'd be a bittersweet ending.

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