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Sugar Maple My Husband

As Anon gets to know Sugar Maple while helping him with studying, Anon finds himself enjoying the time quite a bit. An embarrassing moment makes him realize there's more to this than just friendship, but communicating this proves to be more difficult than expected…

Male/Male Relationship - Human in Equestria - First Person Point of View

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Taquitoprepa

Taquitoprepa #1 · May 17th, 2020 · 1 · 1 · 1 - Day Of Realization ·

I love these kinds of stories!! Especially when it comes to romance between ponies and humans and there are so little stories where the main pairing is clearly gay. I was super excited to find this story and I can't wait for you to continue it!! Your English is picture perfect! Not a single error spotted. I recommend Grammarly as a writing tool if you still don't feel confident about your English. Ah! One thing I would suggest is maaaaybe a sweet little date scene, where they agree its not a date but in the end it is... I don't know I just feel it would be cute!

Please keep up the good work!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

NijiDash

NijiDash #2 · May 17th, 2020 · · · 1 - Day Of Realization ·

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Aww shucks, thank you so much (for the suggestions too)! So happy to hear my story has brought a bit of joy so far, that certainly helps for staying motivated.

I quickly checked out Grammarly and it seems to be quite useful for writing, will definitely try it!

Also, maaaaybe there'll be a dating scene...