• Member Since 22nd Mar, 2020
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LunaMint


I'm a writer and Artist! MLP is my favorite tv show, and I love writing fanfic about it. Warning: all my writing is dark and or sad. Except for the occasional comedy.

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After spike gives into greed, he becomes a vicious beast again. He attacks Ponyville and many ponies get hurt in the process. The second time he attacks, there are even more problems. Rarity is sent to slay him. Once she does however, she immediately regrets it.


I added some new things after taking this story down, just as suggested by, "toshibafox," I made this Rarity's fault which I might just elaborate upon in a sequel.

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Comment posted by Perpetually Confused deleted May 19th, 2020

Amazing how 14 hundred words capture a heart.

somehow make this rarity's fault inadvertently, you know for poetic justice.
this or you could set up some villain with a hatred for dragons and had set this up to get rid of spike since the young dragon was close to the princess. You can even have an experimental baby dragon escape and find its way to ponyville to act as an exposition fairy. That way Rarity could redeem herself while finding out why this happened to spike.

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I like your thinking!

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