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Limestone Pie, a terrorizer in the eyes of the students of CHS. No amount of detention, correctional teaching, or even threat of suspension or expulsion will do the trick. The only one that seems to ever keep her from burning the school down is a girl that many faculty don't even remember being enrolled. But she can keep the beast at bay, so they never questioned it.

Now it's the day of Limestone's graduation and she needs to get the truth out. She needs to tell her.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

10357866
The suspense is killing me, I must know what you think.

It's good, and you made the pairing plausible. It also has a much open-ended back-story. Did Wallflower erase Limestone's memories? Why? Because she felt she wasn't good enough for Limey? Is that why Limey is so sour all the time? She missed her and knew it but didn't know why and it got her so sour? There's alot the reader can build with this in their mind.

10360811
That's exactly what I was going for: creating a base for the reader to make their own theories and possible explanations of how this series of events came to be. I'm glad you enjoyed.

10359532
I wonder how that happened. I never intended to comment. But since apparently I did, the story felt somewhat surreal, but I liked it. Maybe there was too much focus on those dream sequences, but that's a minor complain.

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