A normal everyday in Maretime bay always comes with it's own rush of excitement, but something's off about this day when a new pony comes to the attention of the Mane 5. With him comes a new exciting adventure of friendship and a new anomaly to solve!
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hope to see more of your chapters and remember: Focus on what lights a fire inside of you and use that passion to fill a white space. Don't be afraid of the challenges, the missteps, and the setbacks along the way. What matters is that you keep going.
Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy! https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU
And your pony character Swift Gale sounds great I bet he could beat Zipp in a race.
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Thanks for your kind words and I hope you enjoy further chapters.
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You're welcome