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Sonata Dusk, Aria Blaze and Adagio Dazzle caused insane trouble for the counterparts of our Pony pals, but there's just one question that was never really answered about them... Where exactly did they go after the Rainbooms defeated them?
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It's not that I am complaining, but you seem to decrease the font size near the end of the chapter, was it part of the story?
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By the looks of the positioning, the first word was meant to be shrunk, but the way to end it was messed up a little
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Ah tnx, I just want to make sure if he did it purposely or not
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If you're talking about Adagio's line, yeah it was supposed to be shrunken as a sign of her finally losing her confidence in herself and her usual knowing what to do.
Aaaaand I just realized what you two were talking about XD Just fixed it so the font should be back to normal. Thanks for pointing it out.
Oohhhh it starts really nice, if he also has a personallity that maybe isn't just copying what I see half of the time it would be nice too. It keeps it simple, but I could say that I wish to see just a nice guy again without the whole "fuck fuck", him acting bossy or whatever, I just want something else at the moment there is nothing more to it.
I also didn't meant that it would be your fault if you include a certain personality it just happens afterall,
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but I hope for the best.
Not sure if a different colour or H wouldn't have worked too. I understood that at one point she got louder and then it was still so tiny, which I understand as her talking really quiet. However around that part of the story was what I liked the best.
I like it if they are mean to each other, but I also would love it if he makes Aria understand her sister better or if they would even find out that Sonata has some sort of condition. I just like it if something big happens but then they figure out it has this or that reasons, if you know what i mean.
I just hope that he isn't going to boss them around to much even if he let's them live there. Like that one guy in a story I don't remember completely right now. I only remember he told the character they would talk in the morning because he noticed he would not get anything out of her anymore but continued to ask every five minutes and even got pretty angry in the end I believe. That is just one example.
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No, he won't be anything like that. And I believe I fixed the problem with the font. Their attitudes towards one another have always been somewhat hostile but I believed that losing quite literally everything they had would bring out the very worst in them all. As for how he'll act towards them... You'll have to find that out once I write it.
Looks great so far, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Glad to hear it. Hopefully it'll be out sooner than this one.
continue please
And it's back!:)
I must say that I am greatly enjoying this story you have made. It's interesting to see the sirens in this scenario. Keep up the amazing work!
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I'm glad you enjoy it! I was worried people would hate it cause of the partial self-insert but I'm always happy to hear that it's enjoyable!
This has been great so far! Looking forward to more!
yae
Wow, what a bitch Aria is.
Yeah, I think this is a better ending for the chapter. While I liked the original version I felt that the problem between Aria and Code (more so the former than the latter) was sort of rushed so I'm you came back and fixed it. Also, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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At the time I was kind of just writing a placeholder chapter till I came up with something better. I did, so I came back to rework it to what made the most sense and kept the story sensible. Regardless, I'm glad you like the edited chapter and appreciate the feedback.
This was a nice chapter.
...not realistic.... but who cares, we getting places boys.
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Looking for realism in an MLP fic... Mmmmm not sure on that one, chief.
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oh sheit he got me
I hope you will post a chapter very soon. I love this fanfic.
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Actually working on one now, hoping to get a few out in the time of Thanksgiving. Glad you like the fic, makes me glad I'm doing well.
Good story keep up the good work!👍
The only mistake you've made is making this chapter too short. Continue doing a good job.
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Thanks, and will do. I was hoping to get all three parts out by today but work and life wouldn't have it. Gonna try for the next couple days.
This story looks really good.
Poor Aria. Too beaten down by life to understand charity.
I like the perspective of an outsider who has never met magical beings encountering them.
I think Aria needs a knock up the head to get her to understand how rude she is being.
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Now ain't that the truth. And far more realistic than a movie I recently learned about.
Ha
Oh Rainbow...
The concept of "restraint" seems to elude you, doesn't it?
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This is what you tell all the people who write "realistic" Anon-a-Miss stories.
Ooo, this is seriously good!~
-Rub
Glad this is back.
looking forward to more
Please tell me this story is only on a break and not abandoned. I am caught up and have loved what I read.
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Not abandoned, just been very busy lately. I'll hopefully get more chapters out soon.
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No rush. I'm satisfied knowing that it wasn't dropped. I've seen so many good stories drop off into the abyss of abandonment.
I don’t want to be rude, but can I get a status update on this story?
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Not rude, it's a fair question. I'm still working on it but I'm just taking a bit of a break to refuel on it, working on other stories in the meantime to get back into writing more often. On top of that, I was planning on continuing it more properly around the holidays to line it back up with what I was trying for previously.
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Ok thank you
When sunset called code her brother I immediately thought of Code Shimmer as in shimmer code sunset shimmers podcast
Aw, Code is someone who must be protected at all costs.