The Heart of a Derpy Ditzy

by Derpybrony890

A Derpy Epilogue

“Are you sure this is the place?” Whooves asked me.

“This seems to be the only green house here like she said, it is a surprisingly smaller town than I had intended. Unlike Ponyville.” I said putting the letter up to our faces so that we could examine it once more.

“Well I guess there is only one thing left to do,” Doctor Whooves said as I moved to the door, I began to grow worried thinking that this was all a mistake.

“You want me to do it?” Doctor asked

“No, I need to do this on my own,” I said, knocking on the door finally and waiting for an answer.

“Coming, just give me a second,” I heard a voice say from inside the house.

It opened slightly but stopped at eyes glance, I could see that it was a relatively older mare, more to be in her upper forty's, or early fifties. She had a lovely dark grey coat, mostly darkened by the interior of the house, and an amber mane that was beginning to fade within her age, her eyes were a lovely shade of green, as if there was a field inside of those eyes, and my face displayed indefinite surprise as I looked into them. And I gasped. I knew who she was the minute I saw her.

“M-mom?” I asked

the mare opened the door completely and looked at me with such awe as if she had thought that the one thing she loved was believed to be dead, and is standing right in front of her. As my instinct came up. I hugged her, even if I knew she may not be completely my mother, she may as well be an imposter trying to see if I have anything good to sell. However, the resemblance was too good to be true, and the minute I felt her, the minute both of a lost part of our lives met, I knew she was my mother. My real mother. I began to form tears in my eyes, and I could feel the warmth in her embrace, an embrace that a mother should be giving.

We stayed there for a little while, but I soon noticed that Doctor was standing there, all alone. And I put my hoof out, he took it and became part of the hug. The mare that was holding onto me, smiled at Doctor, as if she knew who he was without even getting an introduction, but accepted that he had helped me find her, and held on tighter, just so she would never let this moment end. Finally, we embraced as a full family. One that I knew that I would immediately love and cherish for years to come. I could finally smile in knowing that the ponies I held were the only ones that really knew about who I was as a mare, and would support me throughout my life. I knew nothing could stop us from being together.

The scene began to fade away and the only thing left was a little circle, engrossing everything in black, but before it was completely gone. A little pink hoof dragged the circle to be wider.

“You really thought we were going to end this all with a boring cliché train scene?” she said tripping over into the black abyss.

“Pinkie! just let the story be over already, they know what was going to happen anyway,” I said trying to reason with her.

“the story doesn’t have to be over; can’t we make a sequel?” Pinkie said in protest.

“Now Miss Pie, you know 75% of the time, sequels don’t work at all, they are just a part of the story that no one needed to know about,” Whooves said.

“But maybe we could be part of the 25% that is good!”

“Pinkie Pie, listen, sometimes stories are good enough that there doesn’t need to be a sequel. For now, why not we just finish this story and wait until the author decides that there will be some sort of sequel. But that doesn’t mean that the author will make a sequel, but that is okay, right? They worked hard on this and I think they deserves a break.” My mother said.

“Oh alright, but can I read it again sometime?”

“Alright, Pinkie, but for now, let's let this story end finally,” I said

“I agree, I don’t think we need any more dialogue from here on out,” Whooves said as we all laughed.

I looked back at the scene and winked with my good eye, causing my right to go up, and leaving the scene to turn black. Except for a star from my eye to shine. And then… Everything was black.

Author's Note:

Alright, that's it! The real it. And to answer Pinkie Pies question... I still don't have an answer. I've been thinking about it, but I don't know if it is good enough to write out. We'll just have to see. Anyway, Thank you all for reading and sticking it out with me from the beginning! I honestly did not think I would get as much attention as I did. I appreciate every view and smile at the thought of them wanting to read my little story I tried to write when I was younger. When I began this story, it was because I felt an incredible tug of insecurity in myself, after years of feeling as if no one could love me romantically (the first chapter was written in my first year of high school, which was a long time ago when I was younger… so yeah, of course, I would feel that way). But when I see Derpy/Ditzy/Muffins, I see myself and feel how others are treating her. Then when I saw these two together, somehow, I psychologically felt that I could find someone if I give myself the patience to wait. Though I still have yet to find my Doctor Whooves, this ship always gives me hope that one day I might.

Comments

[The_Darker_Fonts]

Amazing ending. See you out there, Derpybrony890!

[The_Darker_Fonts]

I have a final dedication to this story. Another song.

Superheroes: The Script

It took me a while to find the perfect song. I was also debating Wanted: Hunter Hayes, but felt this fit them a bit better.

[Derpybrony890]

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Wow, every time I hear that song I always think of these two! Nice job

[The_Darker_Fonts]

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I disliked than liked so I could give it a double like!

[Derpybrony890]

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thank you so much! This is most likely the proudest fic I had ever created and the longest, I do hope that one day I will be able to write something else as good as this.

[-Brutus]

*applauds* This story was so cute and short, good job.

[Derpybrony890]

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I appreciate your kindness . I am glad that you were able to like it enough to read through it all, hope I can make another that you like!