Many ponies have treated Derpy as idiotic and never thought that any pony would ever find her interesting. She always felt that the world was a dark and cloudy day. But soon, a new stallion came to her school, and her world seemed a bit brighter. However, happiness can have problems. So Derpy has to figure out if she does feel like this stallion can help her, or if her world is just one drama after another.
The cover of this story is from https://www.quotev.com/TheElementOfInnocence
I don't know if they were the ones who made it, but every time I looked it always went to this link, if I am wrong please correct me, I don't want any angry comments saying "you got the wrong person idiot! It's so-and-so's artwork!"
Love it~ Derpy needs some love~
Thank you ! and yes, and she does.
well that's not a happy derpy
now that's our happy derpy
Well, there is a sad tag
But it won't always be sad
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oh, okay thank you
A Doctor who is neither the Doctor or from Ponyville!? Ooh~
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Interesting hmm?
Beyond cute.
10277031
I am so glad it brought a smile to your face!
YES!!! justice has been delivered
I would lie to say that I read this right before going into surgery. It really helped calm me down and put a smile on my face. Now, after surgery, I wish to continue reading it to distract me from the pain.
A truly heart warming story
Oh gosh! I hope you feel better! I'm glad that everything went well, and I think that Derpy will definitely bring a smile to anyone who needs it.
Thank you I hope you feel that way till the end
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Well, it needed to happen at some point!
10277031
Beyond the beyond of cuteness
I feel good!
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woohoo
And a lovely chapter it is
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Yeehaw! I’m glad you like it
You make me sad
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I know, I’m a horrible person. But don’t give up hope yet! Just do as the quote says, “keep calm and derp on” (#weneedmorederpyemoticons)
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Don't worry, I make you feel worse. (Seriously, if you read Equestria's Ray of Hope {which you should} you can tell I've got issues )
10306076
Well in some way I do as well , and I did start that story and am very interested in what happens! I'm not usually a big fan of the "human in Equestria" stories, but somehow you really did well (even if it is just the first chapter) and I plan on reading that story until my next update (which should be Friday)
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You make me smile! I just thought of it one day while asking myself, "What is one of the most realistic unrealistic ways a human would be in Equestria, and why?" And boom, EROH
This is what I've been waiting for all week! YEEEAAAHHHH!!!
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hoorah! I glad you wike
Poor Derpy :(
It's pretty sad that her family doesn't treat her right :(
I like the slow burning stories, proceed :)
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glad you like them, hope you stick around till the end
Yes!
Yes yes yes yes yes!
Hell yeah! Screw you, bitch!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, mother trucker! Frickin' rocked it, my mans/womans. This has definitely made my day. (Quick, take notes on how to write romantic scenes!)
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Yeah! BURNNNN the witch! Let her rot in the underworld along with all of the demons she created for Muffins! (honestly, I was super tired of her in the story, so thankfully, you don't see her ever again)
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I'm super glad! I think from here on out is when things get better for the two, I won't spoil anything, but their relationship definitely grows from the start of the story
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O thank Celestia!
Yes, nothing too intimate? I think horny Derpy is probably the strangest Derpy. If I made out with anyone (like that would happen), I believe my mom would kill me in the most painful manner she could find. Great chapter overall.
Seriously thought for a minute that it had transitioned to Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich.
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Alrighty, then. Saw this coming, but still.
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Yeah, I had to think of something last minute, but I am glad that you liked it
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I did say that their relationship grew, and I had that sex tag for a reason.
10351779
Oh yeah. Totally. And I'm smiling.
I got on today and was like, "Wait, it's Friday!" rushed to thi story, and read. I think it's past time to designate a song to this story, so here it is.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cP0bgHYDjVY
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Wow, I really don't deserve this, but I thank you wholeheartedly! But we're not done yet! I'm going to even be generous and post the Epilogue on Monday (it was already my plan, but this just adds on to my determination). Thank you so much!
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A Monday post! I'm FTFO over here!!! Also, look at the likes to dislikes on this story. Yeah, I think you deserve every compliment.
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In any case, I thank you for being a fan and hope to keep you interested in any future project that I decide to publish.
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Just a question, but have you seen the ratings on EROH. Your typing and story work is exemplary. Also, on the topic of my story, howdya like it so far? PM me please.