Nice job and always happy to help

10571970
Thanks

10572017
You are very welcome, friend!

awesome story mate keep it up

Will the next chapter have Ocellus tell the soldiers and their sergeant about the School of Friendship and what Chancellor Neighsay had said to the five races and shut down the school?

10572131
Technically, she already did tell the soldiers about Neighsay insulting them in the second chapter

10572079
Thank you

That was pretty brutal, and I felt perfectly captured the dangers of urban warfare. Distinct Enemy at the Gates vibes to this chapter.

10586780
I'm glad this chapter covered such dangers and frankly, I was intending on Enemy at the Gates vibes, but I can see them now.

And frankly I was worried that Ocellus removing her sweater so the medic could tend her wound would lead to misleading but I was worrying for nothing I see

10586787
Ah. I see.

It's been three years

11570396
I apologize for the lack of updating. The damn pandemic and personal things lead me to not make any updates.

I like this story.