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That’s ridiculous. And ridiculously amusing. Now a morbidly curious part of me wants to see Fluttershy’s reaction when she hears about this.
...pyresteed is eating all of his shirts, isn't she...
This was interesting.
Glad too see you're back, the amazing story continues
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My money is her doing SOMETHING with all his shirts... A nest perhaps?
XD Twilight, you fucking tease!
Also, I will never not like reading the word nyoom.
I wonder what will happen when prestteed is in heat.
My only regret about this story some may ask? I can only give it one like...
Loving this story since page one ~Dollars
P.S. don't worry Max it's not me, I don't steal shirts ...
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That's what I was thinking!!
I hope she gains more intelligence soon. She is needing to learn a lot but I get the feeling that she may have a massive troll streak in her and she is just waiting to unleash it.
How in the world did pyresteed do that? His shirts are probably in a nest somewhere in the library tree.
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Either that or building some sort of nest or something with them
Edit: got ninja'd by Frost
Don't worry about it. I'd rather have you enjoy your writing as much as I enjoy reading it, rather than it just be me having all the fun. In all seriousness though, take care of yourself first. I know I won't pull out the pitchforks if you take extra extra extra long writing something, or that it doesn't get written at all. Sometimes that's just the way it goes.
Take care, encouraging smiles
-Noobblue
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Something something nature is fascinating
lol that ending was funny and unexpected xD
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It's ok, he'll get them back in a few days. My sister, when she was 2 or 3 I think, ate my dad's contact lenses (this was in the 70's when they were hard glass) and the doc said the same thing.
Yeah... No.
We'll just get new contact lenses. No amount of washing will get him to wear those again.
Yay, another chapter! Twilight is such a tease
A hahaha loved this! So happy to get such an awesome update!
*sees a chapter update*
NYOOM!
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That got me thinking. Is she toilet trained?
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10402438 Nah. Just had to go to the bathroom suddenly.
10403252 For the sake of not going into too many details, we'll just assume that yes, yes she is.
Dude wtf
it’s alive it’s!!!!! alllllliiiiiiivvvvvveee!!!!!!(fireworks, opera singers, champagne bottles popping) woooohoo. p.s. nyoom
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I was thinking stuffing her bed with them but a nest works too.
Good chapter, but it doesn't answer anything for why a whole bunch of the comments got a dislike, I sense a hater in the works.
I feel sorry for Pyresteed.
Here she is, a fully sexually mature human female, who is living with a fully sexually mature human male. But the guys too much of a schmuck to help her out ,in any way what-so-ever.
If she gave up on him and looked for an Equestrian Male for her needs, her owner is too big a schmuck to let her have that either. I really do feel bad for her. A normal guy would figure it out and let her have a mate. This guy is too narrow minded for the world he lives in. He just doesn't get it and I doubt he ever will.
My bet is that Pyresteed is grabbing his shirts because they have his scent on them. My wife does the same thing.
The Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
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30 min ahead notice? Count me out right now;)
By the gods, Pyresteed is too darned cute!
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I'm the opposite to a degree, tell me a week in advance, "I forgot" but give me an hour and I will probably get it done, probably.
Are you going to finish this story
Once when we were pet-sitting a neighbors canary it got out and was eaten by our basset hound. She chased him down the stairs with her big deep voice baying the whole way. I can still remember his little yellow wingies sticking out either side of her big floppy lips. How were we ever going to tell his bereaved owner..? Surprise: she put the birdie down at our feet and he was overwhelmed but totally fine! Back in the cage and his owner never the wiser. It's weird how dexterous and gentle animals can be with their jaws when they want to be. I suppose Pyresteed is the same.
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A new chapter is added like... every two months... but yes, the goal of the story in this one seems lost. It has become a lifestyle story at this point.
ed: Or perhaps two months is all it took for me to forget the point.
10425951 That kinda was the point. Sure, there's going to be story arcs and stuff, but there's no over-arcing plot for this one. Just slice-of-life.
All caught up. Poor Tavi but at least she didn't try to eat one of those tomatoes. Hope she and Max get to play again. Once his hand fully heals of course. Pyresteed, oh Pyresteed. She's lucky she's adorable. I'm quite enjoying this semi-casual walk through the cast's lives post shenanigans of the last book. Thanks for the updates and I look forward to reading more.
Are you going to finish the story
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It's a slow progression. He updates when he has free time.
As much as I want all the chapters to be out now, each chapter is well deserving of the wait. Be patient, and you'll be rewarded!
I feel the new job thing. Things are chaotic all around, so I imagine most people just assume problems like that are responsible for such delays. At least you're trying.
up FOR the
The interrogation about chores and subsequent arousal felt like the most marriage moment these two have had so far. All it needed was for someone to have been watching the whole time and it would have been perfect.
nyoom’ed... I know that these days it's popular to make verbs out of everything, but I'm not familiar with this one.
A nice cartoony moment at the end there.
As for the missing shirts... Hmm. It's either something harmless, like Pyresteed taking them to make a nest, something sinister, like a pony fueling their fetish, or something downright evil, like getting his skin cells to cast some kind of voodoo curse. Actually, on that note, it might be something for Twilight to explore with using him for alchemy ingredients, though I probably mentioned that already. We already that his blood makes tomatoes that vampires love, so they really ought to experiment with what else he can do. Fertilize crops with his feces, analyze his hair and nail clippings for potion material, and so on. All findings would have to be kept a secret so that no one tries steal the potential gold mine that is his body. Or maybe the secret gets out and he goes on a trip. That'd be an interesting story line.
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I don’t believe the goal has been made apparent yet. There’s likely a second evil coming, and it will likely have to do with the castle of the two sisters that Twi has been frequenting.
Unbeliveable... She literally eats all she can get in her mouth... I wonder if she is so bored or is just curiouse.
I wonder how long until the blood greenhouse delivers the first batch of eatables.
I guess some obsessive mare/stallion takes his shirt for there sent?
How long is Twilight now in pregnancy?
O damn... I just enjoyed over this week the first story and now the sequel... Now i have to wait for more
I wonder if Celestia keep her tits pierced or not. I think unless she plans to have a foal its very hot
Rainbowdash must be sad that Max cant wrestle with her... Rarity will see him soon enough to make more clothing for the poor fellow...
Maybe a tracking spell on shirts would help fix the problem. The others didnt have a tracking spell so it works most likely.
How is Cadance and Shining? Hm... Odd Luna keeps Twilights pregnancy a secret from Celestia.
I wonder... Dont Twilight have to do health checks for the embryo?
Nice. I like the slice of life thing going on.
It seems a lot more chill than it's prequel.... so far
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My working theory is, Discord was responsible for the continuous near death events that happened back to back. And the horny demons, especially the horny demons.
Though I'm pretty sure lady harmony is still encouraging the horny sometimes....
I gotta wonder how Fluttershy would react to this anecdote.
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Probably like "she did WHAT!"
Lucky Bird, guess they can't have Pets or Pyre will eat them eventually...
How will Shining and the Parents of Twilight react to the pregnancy?
A Foal? A Centaur? A Human? A Harpy?
I am very curious what it will be...
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I'm still waiting for one of these stories to result in a centaur, I wanna see how the characters navigate that shit. Plus descriptors of ones altered form and how characters adjust have always been fascinating to me.