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Wut? .... is this one of the two red changelings? And is it preparing to undergo a metamorphosis into a queen?
Huh.
I'm drawing a blank on if what happened during the Canterlot Wedding was ever mentioned, like humans killing Chrysalis. I do recall that humans HATE changelings, but if that would have actually affected it at all...
I mean, the changeling hasn't Alien'd some eggs into Celestia's body yet, so there is that, but...
10084003 Yeah, it's one of the two red changelings that roam Canterlot Castle. I guess I could have been more descriptive of it. Oops.
10084005 I might be a little rusty on my own lore, but if I recall my past self's reasoning, Equestrian humans don't hate changelings, they can just sense them. The violence comes from the humans protecting ponies from changelings.
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I completely missed that the pet changelings were described as red in the previous story.
10084017 Hate might have been a strong word. I think it was the pegasus, whose name escapes me, was surprised that Max wasn't going berserk against a changeling, but the context of why I don't remember. There was also the human ripping apart the Bellystabber, but again that scene could be read either way.
I wish Luna and Max would have just told Twilight. I hope we can soon see how poor Celestia in Max’s body is doing.
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Given how things can just sorta happen at random (swapping bodies for instance), a glomp from a random (friendly?) changeling isn't out of the question. But it being one of the reds makes the most sense. They seem to have an odd fascination with Max. I do wonder what our little red friend is up to.
nice chapter and good buildup for the next, wonder whats up with that last part ^^
Oh, Luna knows~.
Max you dense motherfucker. (oh wait..that last word is true now)
Woohoo! Good stuff.
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:D
Beings need to sit down and chat before hell breaks loose.
Curious to see what edits Luna made to the letter.
Dang it, Twilight, you still haven't told Max? Also, I'm curious to hear the explanation of how he was even able to knock her up in the first place. Humans and ponies aren't supposed to be able to breed.
Good work. Can’t wait for the next one.
Show of hooves and hands here, who is surprised by this? Just Celestia? Thought as much. Well, at least Max's quick thinking means these shenanigans are going to be solved surprisingly smooth-
*suddenly, changeling*
... Max. Friend. Buddy. Fellow simian descendant. What the hell did you do to Murphy to earn this eternal grudge he seems to have against you?
10084278 Eyeeep, he truly is now.
10085016 Remember the last few chapters of the first/last book, after he was forced to confront his own chaos demon he met the spirit of the tree of harmony; and while their encounter is a far off memory for him, we all know that she said she left him a little gift.
Luna is one more roundabout conversation away from punching Celestia AND Twilight square in the face.
Glad to see you're back. Hope you're doing okay.
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Magic tree God thing
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Got it. Thanks.
Too bad Max wasn't feeling particularly fey.
Why is everyone going on about the changelings... Those two like max and Celestia. Makes sense to me one'd seek them out.
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It looks like it is:
A. Getting fat on Alicorn love.
B. Getting Preggers.
C. About to change to a Changeling Queen
D. All of the above.
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Would it be okay if, if you have the time that is, you could write the whole Max/Celestia Freaky Friday situation from Celestia’s perspective in Max’s body? Just the setup alone along with Celestia trying to keep it a secret just sounds like comedy gold and even though we got a glimpse of it with Twilight wanting to have sex with her thinking she was Max, I think it would be both interesting and hilarious to see how Celestia tries to keep her and Max switching bodies under wraps while Twilight and co act around Max like they normally do (including stuff like wrestling with Rainbow, playing cards with his guards and of corse the fact that Twilight and Max are a couple) without knowing that he’s actually her former mentor.
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If I couldn't have a pony, I'd take a cuddlebug. Not sure if I'd like a gryphon tho, too many sharp claws...
Ehrmahgerd!
A Sequel?!? With the abrupt end of the first story, I was totally not expecting a Sequel.
To paraphrase Best Princess: "HUZZAH! THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!!!"
Changeling used as a sleep aid genius!
Nobuggy expects the SnuggleBug Inquisition! Our chief weapon is surprise...surprise and cuteness...cuteness and surprise.... Our two weapons are cuteness and surprise...and ruthless snuggles.... Our *three* weapons are cuteness, and surprise, and ruthless snuggles...and an almost fanatical devotion to the Queen.... Our *four*...no... *Amongst* our weapons.... Amongst our weaponry...are such elements as cuteness, surprise.... I'll come in again..
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That was some quick thinking Max. Good job. Twilight needs to tell him she's with his foal sooner rather than later. I also think Celly & Max should tell her about the mind swapping. Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next one.
Max is pretty good at lying on the fly... which is the sort of compliment that usually turns heads. Then again, it's not like he's the only one lying here.
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*good at improvisation
Awww... Changeling cuddle hugs are best cuddlebugs
Fantastic chapter
So... Did Max experiences a mare toilet dump or is Alicorn metabolism so demanding that they burn more than usualy is converted into waste that need to be purged via urin or droppings?!
Two Queen incoming. Equestria will have soon a Hive with two Queens
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Sounds familiar
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/133544/of-the-hive
> Author's Note:
Sorry for the long delay. Life sucks, weather sucks, health sucks—but I'm back. For now. Let's roll.
Man. I can so relate to your recent author's notes (at least in previous and current chapters). I have a big fanbase for my music and art; so many people keep asking for more content but life, health, mental health, everything in the way. The struggle is real. I don't know about you, but for me, I want so badly to make more music and art but my mind just will not formulate anything. Just wasted time staring at a blank page with little motivation.
Probs my doesn't quite line up exactly with what you were / are going through but just know, you're not alone in the struggle. And that's okay. But never forget you have a serious gift and talent for writing, and your character development is really enjoyable. I'm still finishing the stuff you've written so far but yeah im looking forward, so much, to more!
Yay! Cuddlebug become royal Cuddlebug ♡
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Totally forget that reading recommendation. I switch it to my front. Looking forward to it, Thanks!