• Published 25th Jul 2019
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Rainbow belly rubs - Gundamfan



You give Rainbow dash belly rubs like theres no tomorrow

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Soft, beautiful fur

You sit at your kitchen table doing the bills, sipping on a cup of coffee. Finances were real tight after your shirt snagged on a low-lying branch and torn while you and Rainbow were out for a walk, and Rarity was out of town visiting her parents. You had to sink some cash into a new shirt and you just barely had enough to pay. You and Rainbow were working extra shifts to earn extra cash in preparation for the monthly bill, but thankfully you both had enough.

You sip from your coffee cup, the rich and bland flavour traveling down your pipe. You finish up with the final payment when you hear your front door open. Looking up from your work, you see a beautiful but tired rainbow pegasus fly in.
She looks up at you and give a tired smile. "Hi baby". She says, hovering over to plant a kiss on your lips. "Hey, Rainbow dash. Are you ok? You look like hell". Her gorgeous rainbow mane and tail were a mess, her beautiful rose eyes a little bloodshot and bags underneath them. Despite this, she still had a pretty strong grip when she wrapped her hooves around your neck in a hug.

"Im a little tired. I had to go down to Louisiana to help out with storm damage and fly all the way to San Francisco to help cool off the city, then I had to come all the way back to Equestria to help rescue a human trapped in a flooded house after the heavy rain we had today". You smile at her. "Well, it warms my heart to hear you doing so much good work with us humans". She cheers up a little. "Hey, you guys are a part of our "family" too! Theres no way I'd let you all suffer in bad weather"! You get up from the table and walk over to the refrigerator. However, Rainbow dash stops you."Oh, no need. I picked up some fast food on the way home. 2 hayburgers and an oats soft drink for me, and a big mac and DR. pepper for you"! She says, dumping the food out onto the table. You both head up to your room to watch youtube videos on your laptop as you eat, ranging from lets plays of horror games, to a documentary on the Napoleonic wars, to Rainbows boredom.

You two then play video games on your PS3 and PS4, at one point when you were beating her, she gets on top of your shoulders and covers your face with her wings, causing her to win. She then proceeded to burst out laughing as you give her an angry scowl. You lunge at her, Rainbow taken by surprise but is able to get the upper hand in the "fight". She swipes her tail across your face, a pretend slap if you will, and flies to the other end of the room. she flies towards you but pulls herself up so that her belly button was visible to you. The soft fur of her belly slams into your face, and you both pretend fall onto your bed, laughing like hyenas. "Awww, man. my mouth was open"! You exclaim. Rainbow grins at you. "In your case, isnt that a good thing"? She then grabs her stomach and holds it up to you. "My belly likes you. She wants to date you"! She then makes kissing noises as you try in vane to get away. You both start laughing again, as Rainbow lays down on your chest, her wings wrapped around your body.

"Oh, god. Rainbow, you may have been the best thing thats ever happened to me. There are no words to describe how much I love you". She giggles and kisses your forehead. "No, I love you way, way more! Dont let the others know, but you can be a little adorable when you laugh! Maybe I just love seeing you so happy"! You pull her close and kiss her lips. She pushes more of her weight down onto your body, kissing you like crazy, cheeks, lips, and forehead. You two finally end it with one long, deep kiss. You open your eyes and use your thumb to slowly pry open her left eye, a small grin visible on her face as she deepens the kiss. Her grip around your neck tightens, and she raises a wing up to your head, gently running the feathers through your hair.

You let out a relaxed sigh, causing her to giggle a little. You rub the soft fur on her back, causing her to sigh happily. You two break the kiss after what felt like an eternity. She gives you several quick kisses on your lips before leaning her forehead against yours and saying, "Oh, Anon, I love you so, so, so much. Your the only other thing I care most about besides the wonderbolts, my friends and family". You grin. "What are you talking about? We got married a month ago, in canterlot. Im your dads son-in-law and your my dads gorgeous daughter-in-law". She then pulls you into a hug, your face buried in your chest as her wing strokes your back and hoof rubs your head. "Even this doesnt come close to showing how much i love you".

"Well, let me show you how much I love you Rainbow". You slowly turn her over, her back resting against your stomach. You press your fingers and palm to the soft blue fur of your mares belly and begin to rub in large, slow circles. She sighs happily, leaning her head up to kiss your cheek. "You can be such a sweetheart under the right conditions, Rainbow".
She smiles. "Yeah, i'd figure if i acted mean and tough you'd dump me for Fluttershy. How is her work at finding somepony going anyway"? "Well, I hooked her up with one of my old friends from high school. He's hoping to get a job at the zoo, so i figure he was perfect for her. They both volunteered at the animal shelter and have managed to give a lot of dogs and cats away to good homes". She tears up a little. "Awww. Im so happy for her".

"Are you tearing up"? You ask. She wipes way the tears. "Yeah, but dont tell anypony or i'll kill you".
You chuckle and continue to caress her stomach. You marvel at how soft her belly fur is, and as you usually would do whenever yo rubbed your mares belly, you tickled her belly button with your finger. She giggles and pushes your hand away with her hoof. After the third time, she says "Ok, thats enough." You tickle her belly button again. "Ok, seriously, Im very ticklish down there". You tickle again, leaning your head towards her belly. "what? You want me to dress you up like that Boba fett guy from star wars and get twilight to shrink you down so we can reenact the sarlacc pitt scene?" You ignore her and start to blow wildly into her belly button. "BWAHAHAHAHAAA! STOP IT! STOP IT! I'LL KILL YOU! STOP! IM GONNA PEE"!

You pull away and catch your breath, but you feel Rainbows hooves grab your head and pull you down to her belly again. Your face is smooshed against her belly, as she says, "HA! YOU FOOL! THE BELLIES OF PEGASUS PONIES ARE ACTUALLY ANOTHER MOUTH! FEED HER! AGGGHHH"! You give pretend screams, before she lets you go and you roll onto your back. You are both laughing wildly again. "Man, Your such an awesome marefriend Rainbow"! "And your an awesome...boyfriend, is that what you humans call it? boyfriend"! The sun had finally set when you two got up to head for the bathroom and prepare for bed. After brushing your teeth and bathing, (still kissing despite under the showerhead) you both climb into bed, Rainbow wrapping her hooves around your neck, wings around your body and swishing her beautiful tail over your legs. She grabs a piece of blanket in her teeth a pulls it over your head so that your ear is now covered and kisses yo on the forehead. She whispers, "Goodnight my love. I'll protect you throughout the night".

Author's Note:

As you could probably tell, i have a major crush on Dashie.:rainbowkiss: I may do a romance story on pinkie pie,:pinkiehappy: Applejack,:ajsmug: or Fluttershy.:fluttershysad: Tell me what you'd like to see.:twilightsmile:

Comments ( 22 )

I can't believe you wrote a story about belly wubs, you pervert :flutterrage:
I swear, kids these days. The next thing you know, you'll be writing stories about non-consensual nose boops. :fluttercry:

If only you had even the slightest idea of spelling and grammar...

9749746
I mean missing capitalization, no spaces between sentences, no empty lines between paragraphs, tense errors, quotation errors,
and a lot more. Those were what I picked up after the first maybe 200 words and stopped reading.

9749672
Weirdly enough, I'd non-ironically say to be careful with those; they look quite a bit like punches to the face, so people might misunderstand your intentions, especially when the other person flinches away afterwards.

Should i delete and start over?

Boops for Cider?

How low have you sunk rd <.<

9749867
I just thought it was a really cute picture.

9749773 Maybe ask someone for help with proofreading and editing? It's pretty common practice and you'll learn a lot if you work closely with them.

That cover image. :rainbowkiss:

9749758
OH! So THAT'S what they were doing at the bar and why they did it so hard!

San francisco

Rainbow dash

:ajbemused:

"Oh, (Insert name here) I love you so, so, so much

:derpyderp2:

9749773
I don't see the point. Edit it, until the most glaring and obvious issues are dealt with.

9750019
I dont get it.

9749969 your Derpy picture is freakiing adorable!:derpytongue2:

9749969
I'd definitely rub that belly.

9750019
I....Still dont get it. What issues?

9750079
Respectively, both words of names get capitalized, second verse same as the first, and you left a placeholder where a name is probably supposed to go. The first two are things you could legitimately get away with not noticing, but the last one... I don't care if you did it on purpose, it's dumb and jarring and if you honestly thought it was a good idea then it at least explains what ol' Crimson Prose is doing here. (That's the second alt that headless_rainbow created when she first wrote something non-horrifying that she still didn't want associated with her main, and OC-named accounts get top billing in alt-wars)

9750182
I fixed them like you wanted.

I enjoyed reading this a lot! Also, why so many grammar Nazis here?

V8

9762929
Now you're just trying to make me laugh!

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