After countless years of being trapped in the Soul Cairn, a kind soul finally freed him, and put his old friends heart at ease. he has been running from the monsters for so long, and is happy to be rid of them, and happily takes his new best friend to wherever he wants to go. on a peacefl day of riding though, something happens, and he finds himself succed back into the soul cairn, and a purple unicorn, who doesnt realize it at the time, is about to make a new friend.
in game, Arvak is technically undead, so he will stay that way during the fic. tags and/or characters may be added or removed should it be necessary. teen for some swearing and a bit of violence in the beginning.
cover art by falloutcaleb. this features him from a future chapter.
Good job. I'll be waiting for more chapters.
This story is great. I'd give you a Sheogorath but all I have are Pinkies. Close enough.
You did a very good job on this chapter.
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thanks, i never know how good i do until someone tells me, thats why i always ask for feedback in the story description.
I sense issues. Pinkie shall make everything more entertaining!
Also: how will Luna react? o_O
Arvak is an accidental Pinkie Pie? YES!!!!
I like this. Very much.
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sorry 'bout the late update, like my other story, school was being a pain. now, i cut it short, i decided to do the party on another chapter instead of this one.
again, let me know if anything is amiss, grammer, spelling, thigs like that.
I won't lie to you, this could use some improvement. The pace is too fast, there are a few grammar errors, and the characterization is a little iffy. Though that last one is just an opinion.
BUT! This story has caught my attention. Its funny, doesn't linger, and Arvak is in it. I'll be honest, I was thinking of doing a story featuring Arvak, but never got around to it. Then, hello, I see this! Despite my nitpicking, I like it. Please, continue.
1526341 thanks, I'll see if I can slow it down a bit and try to fix up any grammar mistakes.
Poison Joke... Dun dun duuuuun!
I now want Sheogorath to show up.
Why does Arvak sound like Ed now?
Bit of a reference. Hope you don't mind.
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You have amused me mortal. Congratulations!
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sweet jesus you're fast! anyway, next chapter should be up after thanksgiving.
Runescape? YES OH YES
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i see you have found the coment on Reborn's page. so, pray tell, what brings you to this story?
1635488 Just browsing the recently updated stories. Gotta say, Runescape was and is a major gaming fave of mine.
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too true. just before during the comment buzz i got i was dunioneering with a friend... we died six times by a lvl 134.
sucks that the EoC is comming to everybody on Nov. 20th, but hey, what u gonna do?
1635513 I think that they have a perfectly fine system as it is. I still wax nostalgic for the old days of 07 and 08.
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yea... joined up back in 04, alot changed, but i dont that change will not stop me.
1635538 We'll see where Jagax shall take our darling Gielinor.
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yes we shall
I wonder how it would end up if blue blood met arvak
I recently got the Dawnguard expansion. When I got to the soul cairn and freed Arvak, This whole story came rushing back to me. I was freaking out. In a good way.
I love this story. I really do.
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Thanks! Glad you like it
I just thought of a funny thing that is bound to turn up in this story.
"Mom, Dad. Meet my special somepony. He's undead."
"Oh he can't be that bad....wait what?!"
I won't even get started on Shining's reaction.
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All shall be revealed next chapter.
So there was a chapter 11? It's not there now.
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waiting on _Silver with the editing for Ch11, dont know why its taking this long though, sent it last month. ill send him a text, if you want i can send you a raw copy to look over, i find it easier on the reader if i have my work looked over before i post it, thats why i usually ask for help when i am about done typing a new chapter
2085848 No thanks. Don't want to spoil it. ;) Still, this is one of my favorite stories. Also: thanks for the favorite on my crossover.
Netch is best pony.
Netches. The cattle of Morrowind.
Very nice, perhaps put the link to the song in the story, right before the song starts, so we can read along
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I'll work on that tomorrow then. Thanks for the suggestion
Am I the only one thinking of the Futurama 'death by Snu snu' thing?
There are issues with capitalization. I also noticed that the song woke the ponies from their "lumbers". They must be seriously into late-night carpentry.
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Whoops. I'll fix that soon. Thanks for letting me know.
Wait...Prega-twi? encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSVMDj3_Sh0oLGXoG_xAkjItJAMsbYsAc4SlymcbVK_m4MM5bqh
Have you been living by my example on awesome surprises?! *taps chin* I dont know how I feel about that. However, I think you should comb through this and capitalize a few senteces. I am very impressed and very surprised with these developments. Its good to go as soon as you check up on grammar.
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Alright, I'll fix it up before school and see if I cant get it out.
HA........... oh my god help us
I can't wait till Arvak meets the Sheoggorath of Equestria... Discord
Well that was epic.
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Thanks
I was actually listening to this song for the past few weeks when I wrote this chapter, so it kinda snuck it's way in.
more please
Everything