Frost is a unique pony. It's not that she is half Argonian either, it's the fact she was born with her cutie mark. it is said that those born with their marks are destined for some kind of leadership, but she could care less. the reason? a dream she had one night, a dream that will uncover a plan, which she will foil, even if she has to travel across Nirn to do it.
happens after events of Revival.
for descrpitions of Frost's friends, go to the last chapter in Revival, just skip the part with akatosh and youll have it.
Chapters (3)
PREPARE YOURSELVES
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REGIDAR PLS
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I find that fact that you can keep up the Cobain GIFs pretty impressive.
Seriously though, about the fic. Just reading the description, I can see that your main character is a Mary Sue. Also, half-Argonian-half-pony? No.
Finally, I'd like you to answer me a question. What colors is Frost? What two spectacularly overused colors is she?
1634190 I've got them all, man. They're like Pokemon.
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purple and red. ifyou have read my first fic, you would know who she is. the leadership part will be explained next chapter.
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prepare your anus, more like
i'll go read the other story
maybe it will have something in it to mitigate this disaster
or at least explain it because towlie.jpg
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your story revival has 267 unique viewers, of which you and i are two. it's very unlikely that anyone who reads this off the front page has read the other already
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You missed the point entirely. And no, in your picture she's black and red.
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to sum up my first fic, two argonians foil a plot by dagon and Sithis to take over equestia. one of them dies and the second lives on. later, the dying tribe they were apart of is granted a place to live in equestria, but some changes happen. Frost is a child of an argonian and a pegasus, the next chapter will explain her role a bit more.
1634281 Prepare your trainus, more like.
But what would I know? I'm just a furfag.
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im pretty sure i made her purple when i colored her in paint... ill fix it to make it more clear.
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thanks dude, you saved me the trouble of reading and leaving a comment on your hard work
and probably everyone else who scrolls past that post as well
quoted for posterity
edit: like a misaimed rocket, the sarcasm flies right over your head
quads edit oh fuck: actually that wasn't really sarcastic at all, i really do thank you
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man thought you were smarter than to take any of that seriously
i don't care if people walk around in fursuits 24/7 as long as they upvote me
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your welcome
One of my greatest pet peeves is when people confuse "your" and "you're". They sound the same, but they are used for two different things. "Your" is used when someone is referencing something that belongs to someone else. Example:
"You're", a contraction of "you are" is used when someone is describing another person. Example:
It vexes me to no end how many times people make this simple mistake.
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whoops
thanks, ill look it over and fix it.
on an unrelated note, i use microsoft word, and apparently it doesnt know the difference between the two.
edit: and done
1634320 For the trolls, man. For the trolls.
Also, fursuits suck. It's worse then a mascot costume, I nearly died of heatstroke. Also, they seem really pointless. I keep my furrism in my head.
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1634432 Furries: Create animal/antho versions of themselves, and role-play as them, creating art and stories about them.
Bronies: Create ponies/use existing ponies, role play with them and create art and stories.
Yeah, nothing similar at all. Them furries sure are creepy.
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it's a natural reaction, yo
like a defense mechanism or one'adoze evolution thingz
then again we all furries on tha inside
othawise we wouldn't be writin' shit about talking ponies
amirite bruthaman?
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ACCEPT THE FURFAG IN YOU
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SERIOUSLY, WHERE ARE YOU PULLING ALL THIS COBAIN FROM? ARE YOU HIM? ARE YOU KURT?
So short. I mean come on
1634543 Sounds like you have a pretty good idea. Being a part of the underbelly of both, my friends call me Furfag McCloppinstien.
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I'm afraid not, child. But fear not. I have plenty more where this came from.
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the chapter or the comments?
the chapters will get longer i assure you.
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None of this "I'll make it better l8r." crap. That excuse is so overused on this site it's not even funny.
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make it better later? i planned for the first two to be short. the other chapters will have more stuff is all im sayin.
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Well, at least he's purple now.
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Frost is a girl... sorry if there is a mixup.
My god...
SPARTA!!!!
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I'm sorry man, but... Ugh. Really? This hurts. I'll try to be nice, but, no promises.
Your grammar is barely coherent. Editor, please.
Now, onto the thing that made me even CLICK the link. Frost is HALF ARGONIAN WTF IS DIS I DON'T EVEN.
Griffon, changling, DRAGON?! I can live with those, but HALF ARGONIAN?! That is taking artistic liberty too far. It is worse then an alicorn OC whose colors are red and black. I...
a0.twimg.com/profile_images/1763100962/Princess_Luna_avatar_09_normal.jpg Oh, Celestia. Someone broke Dawnforge again. Right. Princess Luna will take care of this... I don't have much more to add then Dawny did, however. The story is... bad. I really can't add much more, and not take all night here. Ohwait, I'm going to anyways.
Half argonian has to be the biggest thing ever. I'm actually surprised the TWE haven't been here. Just that bad? A Skyrim pony crossover could be done, Faust, a ponified Skyrim would be epic, but.. this? I feel like going into a corner and crying now. I mean, just skimming over this, you need alot of help in grammar and even writing. I wish I could be more in-depth, but that half-argonian in and of itself makes even fully reading the Prologue horrid and mind-numbing.
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your concerns have been taken into account, but frankly, i have asked for editors and even proofreaders before, so i dont think the issue around that may be solved soon. and on the topic of the prologue, she doesnt even show up... its a dream she has involving a secret meeting by the Aldmeri Dominion.
1637463 Horray! Friendz!
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1638656 Easy. Tumblr can be used for more then watching bitchy feminists cry about men and for looking up porn.
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That statement just made my day.