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I come from the land of the green and unknown, from tenth page drop, where the horse words flow.
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Cute and heartwarming
... you just used search&replace on this, didn't you? Well, you missed a bunch of "your", e.g. (had a laugh at the second one):
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welp. Thanks for the catch, edited.
Not sure why this story has so many downvotes
While the writing is decent, the pacing makes it hard to appreciate this story. Becasue everything is rushed the dialogue appears worse than it actually is.