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decembuary


I am trying to improve my writing. It's not very good.

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The three races, the pegasi, earth ponies and unicorns are no longer peaceful. They all think they are the superior race. After a verbal attack on the pegasi by the unicorns, the three races are at war. In the middle of it all are 6 ponies who play a more important part in the war than they could ever expect.


This story is written by me and a friend of mine, so every second chapter is written by her, so the writing style may change.

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Comments ( 8 )

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Uh oh, this is not going to go well for any of the three tribes. And it's interesting to show this from the children's POV.

This is horrible. What's making the three pony kinds act like this? And what the hay is wrong with applejack?:fluttercry:

And now we get to see the poines hurt by this stupid racist garbage, and families getting torn apart.:twilightangry2: Please keep up the good work on this story!

Ohh, these foals are the new harmony bearers? Hopefully they can get over the predjudice the adults have poisoned them with.

Uh, oh.... what could lunabe hiding? I hope Nightmare Moon hasn't taken her over again! :applecry:

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