You, a student attending Victus College, are shocked to discover that your new roommate is an Equestrian, and that you're put in charge of making sure she enjoys her stay.
I just buy a mask and sword from some cloaked weirdo, and now I'm in a world of humanoid ponies in Equestria. Oh, and I have powers that are identical to Spider-Man. Well, this is my life now
Leon Parker has been getting use to being in Ponyville since Twilight and her friends saved his life. Though his own peaceful life won't be staying for long when both his Earth homeworld and Equis are in danger from new powerful enemies.
Jerome is a lone human in Equestria. But you’ve probably already read a million stories like his. So let’s just get to the part where he falls for Rainbow Dash, okay? Wait, maybe you weren’t expecting this kind of falling...
Thank you for taking the time to read my story. After reading your comment I went back and fixed up some grammar and spelling mistakes. I hope it reads even better now.
Yo, that was real nice! Needs some fixin in grammar and sentence structure, but it's well readable and understandable.
Keep up the good work!
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story. After reading your comment I went back and fixed up some grammar and spelling mistakes. I hope it reads even better now.
Rainbow's design disturbs me
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Alright.
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the story is fine, its just the art