• Published 9th May 2019
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I Can't Sleep - anonpencil



Berry Punch can't sleep. She can't stop thinking, and worrying, and fretting over everything going on in her life. But maybe her lover can help put her to bed...

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Comments ( 19 )

“Onto the bucket list, having sex in all of those places we’re going to visit.”

It's just the right kind of lovely and loving kinky, pencil.

And thank you, for the story, for the reminder and for just being you!;)

9613502
Oh hell yes, definitely a good bucket list item for anyone! XD


9613542
As always, thank you right back. I'm always happy to see you've commended on my story, and you never disappoint!
And yeah, I wondered if this counted as kinky or vanilla, haha

>Saddle Arabia
>Prance

They really should go see where the Japonies live.

9613718
WE DO NOT SPEAK OF THAT STORY HERE.

I'm a sucker for lovey dovey feels, even if it is sort of bittersweet stuff like this.

Flam was right, "tear jerker" is a perfect description~ :heart:

9614329
DAMN IT FLAM.
I mean... yes it's apt, but good lord! I suppose that's what the series will be remembered as now. XD

oh man im always conflicted when reading this particular story because it always fucking wrecks me in a way. Its good but it just manages to bring out the water works.

Good one, I love this kind of 'comfy first person' fics. Liked!

really want this to be a full story now

9614827
Lucky you, it actually is. ;)
It's part of a series I write called Broken Love, and the first one is here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/315651/when-you-least-expect-it
Thanks for reading!

God, that was good. And yes, good idea to start slowly on the Bucket List. As long as you start on it.

ROBCakeran53
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Damn... Pencil, this was quite the series. So very emotional, deep, and real. Makes you really think about life, and what you're doing in it. Your choices, and just how you want to live. A song comes to mind, and I know it's cliche as hell, but so what? It's appropriate.

Here's to hoping there's more to the story coming out for this.

It took me far too long to notice that the previous chapter title was an (excellent) pun, this time I'm on it like a shot, top notch.

Skipping gaily over the rumpy pumpy what I truly delight in is how they get on with another, really. Persevering through difficulty and plainly so deeply besotted. It's lovely!

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