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The life of me, a human, who ended up travelling to Equestria via fall through a chasm. Now I've got to deal with 6 colourful ponies and a struggle to find my place in a world where I don't fit in, all the while doing my best to find my way back to my own world. Story of my life in a nutshell....
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and thin they had sex the end? lol! jk! but good story.
Ooh, suspenceful.
Twi already likes him. O_o also I laughed at the puppet show bit.
And Pinkie's secret is revealed.
so far so good
HOW did I only NOW understand what PDP stood for?
Hell, I wouldn't even have known it was Pinkie Pie if she hadn't said her signature "Okie-Dokie-Loki!"
The story felt like it was going dizzyingly fast. Maybe try slowing down on your writing a bit, describing things more and introducing points in the story more slowly.
Other then that, a pretty good plot and story. I enjoyed reading it.
PDP - Pinkamnea Diane Pie?.
that brings back memories of a certain Fanfic *cough*CUPCAKES*cough*
Okay. This. Is. Awesome!
Personally hope he tells them to go to hell but awesome anyway
Huh... Apparently, I read this a while ago... Back in those days... I think, it was in 2016...
I remember reading these alternate-story chapters. But some of the latest didn't exist then. However I'm certain I haven't recalled a word from the earlier chapters... Weird...
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It's not exactly my best work. Thank you for coming back though~
Tbh I'm surprised anybody remembers reading this fondly.
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Again, back in those days... MLP was exciting as never before! Now I seem to have lost something... Then, however, fanfiction was a wonder. Also I was more naive... And this here reminds me of those days I consumed every fanfic... Though it is not the greatest work (there's stuff to improve!), it allows to immerse deeply. The "stageplay" wraps around and sucks in. Amazing! Also the "script" at times was easy to guess, but I allowed myself to doubt, if I had guessed it correctly. I suppose, this is the key to satisfaction: having a guess, waiting for the answer, and then confirming it was correct! Makes feel you smart, you know?
Of course, at times certain lines felt just stupid. Fictitious characters say many unlikely things, but some of them are believable to say, while others make no sense! Also: sighing and groaning. Characters are expected to behave in a certain way. It may be bizarre, but it has to be believable! Now, sighing in frustration and giving in seems not. Like: "Please, do this for me!" -- "Uh, I doubt it's sound..." -- "Please!" -- "And one more thing: I don't like it! Dignity and all such... you know?" -- "Plea-a-ase!" -- "No... [frustrated sigh] Oh, alright!.." Nope. You won't see it in real life, for one. And you wouldn't want someone (or yourself) to say this, for two. Also there is no drama in it (in case unwise things have to be said, the rule of drama adds reason for a character to behave "illogically").
Other things were there too, but -- I've been allowing many things in fanfiction, which I would not, if it were original fiction. So I may let it slide
. Let us face it: writing fanfiction is rather... amateurish... So... We should tolerate many things... and enjoy them (or at least try to)!