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The Picnic Gathering

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Twilight Sparkle wants to improve her relationship with her friends and therefore invites them to a picnic. However, something else is happening behind the scenes. They all appear to fear Applejack and be acting very unusual for such a simple activity. Fluttershy isn't talking, Pinkie Pie seems upset, Rainbow Dash is forgetting things, and Rarity isn't eating. Can Twilight Sparkle pull the ponies together before Princess Celestia arrives?

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Twilicorn

Twilicorn #1 · Aug 7th, 2012 · · ·

That was interesting...
A bit over descriptive in general, and the words don't seem to fit the situation, but overall, it isn't terrible. Great twist

flutterspin

flutterspin #2 · Aug 7th, 2012 · · ·

1046444 Yeah. I've been trying to improve my writing for the past three months. I guess I did kind of overdo it with the descriptions. I wanted to experiment with keeping up with the characters within the dialogue.

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