One of the ponies in Equestria hears an unusual voice and gets trapped in an epic adventure in discovering the true source behind it. Could it be Discord? Are the ponies in danger? With the help of his new found friends and the duo power of the princesses, they must band together in facing this mighty foe and learn how to stop him before all of Equestria gets transformed in his new world order.
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This was a fun experience. I made a version with a few notes if you want to know what was going through my mind while writing it.
Editor Notes
Update: Please be aware that this is from my very first final draft before I started revising it.
542636 Dude that is just about the most hilarious thing I have ever seen.
543232 THANKS!
542636
DUDE THAT IS JUST EPIC XD
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551971 Here you go good Sir!
pinkie pie, you are so random
Great story u are a wonderful writer
Thanks. I wish more people would read it and encourage me like that. At least it got some attention.
After further research, I definitely feel like the story isn't that great. Whenever I read it, I love it. I just don't think it is professional enough. I took the time to write out this post to help explain the situation more.
i like it so far. i've got this hunch that moonlight is maybe a little bit self insert. mostly because you seem to have really great insight into his thoughts and he feels really genuine. anyway great story definately deserves more publicity.
(also i noticed you used sumica in the story)
Great story. I especially like the fact that Moonlight was powerful, but didn't even know it.
3818299 I'm sort of amazed after all this time that someone was able to find and read my story. I'm no professional writer, but I do appreciate it when someone out there enjoys my story.