Hello, my name's Whooves! I'm just your average brony. I'm a major Appledash shipper/writer, and I like to make stories and other content.
All Lightning Dust ever wanted to do was become a Wonderbolt like her father before her, but after a pony named Rainbow Dash takes that all away, she vows to get revenge. Then a group called the Shadowbolts approaches her and tells her of a way to get revenge, but will she take the offer?
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Hey, it says 'Rainbow dash' in the short description, but Lightning Dust in the long one and the story itself. Just something that you should fix.
Other then that, not bad. Will be following.
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She is mentiond in the Short Description so that the readers (Sutch as yourself) know when the story takes place/sets up the story itself, she will be mentioned alot in the story but she will not be a charictior
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Yeah, but the way it's worded makes it seem like she's the main character. I'm just sayin'.
Will the two Pegasi Lightning had for wingponies in The Washouts appear in this story?
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No, Im afraid due to the time line, and the fact that Lightning created the Washouts they would not appere, however I can say they may or may not be name droped in future storys, and or chapters in this story
Will this story be as long as Dust on the Wind?
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Yes, it has Alot more chapters
I finally read this. I must say it’s a little bothersome that it moves so quickly then ends abruptly at pivotal moment. However there’s some entertainment to be had when seeing a story told from the villain’s side. I wonder is this gonna be continued at some point? Like I said it does come to a screeching halt by ending abruptly at a pivotal moment.
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Great question!! I have gotten this question alot and this story is acutaly a prequel to another story of mine called Clash of The Bolts. So if you want to find out what happens to good old Lightning and Cinch you can find out in that story!!
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LD plays a role in a long fic I’m writing but she doesn’t first appear until well in to the second Act. If you’re curious...
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Also you might want to put in the description that this story is a prequel to the other. I wouldn’t have known if you hadn’t told me.
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The story is not an official prequel, just like Roge One or Solo is not an offisial Prequal to the Star Wars films, this is a side story that takes place in the past/present
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Also like I mentioned LD is a player in my current epic but doesn’t appear until a ways in.
Oh. Okie doke lokie!
Ok, spitfire was shooting some low blows.
There are a few questions that need to be answered.
I have a few questions.
I don’t get the saying.
I have a few questions.
What was that dream about?
Sky Striker is so confusing.
Ok, I don’t know how I feel about how Lightning Dust found out who the Changeling was.
Damn, what was the point of telling Lightning to kill her if she was gonna do it herself.
Damn, I feel like there should be some tags added.
Damn, Lightning and Sky had a good time celebrating.
Damn, the shadowbolts on some ninja sh*t.
I feel like sky got himself killed on purpose.
I think I need a sequel.
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There is a sequel!! Check out https://www.fimfiction.net/story/440780/clash-of-the-bolts-battle-for-the-skies