• Member Since 7th Jan, 2018
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Whooves235


Hello, my name's Whooves! I'm just your average brony. I'm a major Appledash shipper/writer, and I like to make stories and other content.

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Applejack and Rainbow Dash spend their Hearth’s Warming Eve with their son Zap Apple, but he is acting very weird. Can Rainbow and Applejack find out what is wrong with their son?

Warning: This story talks about serious topics such as Self-Harm, Suggested Rape, and Suggested Depression. Do not read if you are sensitive to these things.

Thanks to my Proofreader 0_0

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

I'm already concerned about the incorrect use of 'there' in the description.

This was pretty good. This definitely got me interested in reading the prequels to this story. I can't help wondering, what exactly did Zap go through during his kidnapping?

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I was not planning on wrighting a story about Zap and his experience with his kidnappers, but now that you mention it...it sounds like a good idea

9383245 If anything else, it'll help clear up the mystery behind what happened and help us relate to Zap more.

The question I had why was he kidnapped his parents his ties to the elements maybe a ransom possibly revenge?

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Ill Never Tell....:trixieshiftleft:

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