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Carnelian-Fox


Hi! I'm Carnelian Fox! Thank you so much for looking at my user page. I hope you'll like what you see. I have high hopes for uploading more stories in the future.

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Ever since he was lift in the dust by his friend, Chummer, Capper Dapperpaws led life as a lone cat, a party of one. However, fate had had other plans for him in the form of fair Rarity, who had changed his whole world with her generosity, kindness and genuine spirit. Realizing he was finally tired of being alone, he decides to take a long trip to Ponyville from Kluge Town to celebrate Hearth's Warming Eve for the first time, looking back on how much the alabaster unicorn had impacted his life.

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Comments ( 4 )

This is pretty good story; you did a good job with the pacing but you may wanna ease up on the exclamations when you have everyone talk to each other. Unless they're actually shouting at each other, then feel free to exclaim as you will.

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Duly noted. I'll be sure to ease up on that in the future.

9369215
Glad I was able to help.

That’s awesome

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