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Carnelian-Fox


Hi! I'm Carnelian Fox! Thank you so much for looking at my user page. I hope you'll like what you see. I have high hopes for uploading more stories in the future.

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It's New Year's Eve and Starlight Glimmer is spending it with her old pal and secret crush, Sunburst. The two of them spend their evening up on a balcony, watching the night sky and trying not to hold back their feelings. They're afraid to air their emotions, though, for fear that their friendship will be at stake and for having a lack of practice talking about their feelings. It's a big game of risk and reward and they both know it.

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Comments ( 10 )

Well done! For a first story this is very good (though don’t take me too seriously, I only have two). I’ll be checking in on your page from time to time,I think.

That was great. Especially considering it was your first story here. As a fan of the Starlight/Sunburst pairing, I think you wrote them very well.

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I'm so glad you liked it!

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Thank you so much for reading!

Not nearly as many stories about this pairing as there should be. Certainly not many as well-written as this. Thanks!

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Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! That is high praise! I am glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for your support.

Okay, yep. I may not be a very good writer, but I read a shit ton, and you, my friend, are a wonderful writer. I've seen many people write great stories with terrible spelling or grammar, or composition, and it takes away from the scene and characters. You don't need to worry about that. While short (relatively speaking), this is without a doubt a work of art.

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Oh my goodness, thank you so much! It means a lot to hear that, or rather, read it. It means the world! Thank you!

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