• Published 21st Dec 2018
  • 3,091 Views, 7 Comments

Really Hold Me Tight - Barley Citrus



Sunset and Rarity spend a quiet Christmas together, but with friends and lovers all away for the holidays, the two realise that they're just as lonely as they are horny and decide to comfort one another.

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Comments ( 7 )

I do like Rarity Sunset

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Yea, it's one of my favourites

What a wonderful story! It was... different, I’m not sure if that counts as cheating even though it totally does. I have to say your dialogue is on point, really nails their voice if I do say so myself. This was a fun read, and quite hot, all around great job! I’m excited to read more of your stuff

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Thank you and I really appreciate the detail
I do put a lot of work into their character voice, So I'm glad you enjoyed it
And happy to hear you're excited cause I've got some exciting stuff on the way
Stick around

I sense drama bomb.

This nearly gave me an anxiety attack, my poor raritwi heart! :raritydespair: that said this was still a really good read. I was sure Rarity was gonna cave 😅 but I'm so glad she didn't. Also I do feel a little bad for Sunset..but I'm sure she'll be fine. Will there be a chapter for when Twilight comes back?

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Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
If you're feeling bad for Sunset, then you're in the right mindset. There's more to come for her.
And whether or not there's a chapter for Twilight's return? Short answer, no, long answer, maybe.
I'm still working it out

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