I am 14 years old and I write fanfic to contribute to the fandom. :)
If you always lose everything you have, can you be sure you even had it? Is it even lost? Sometimes it's better to deal with life. Sometimes it's just better to go.
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Why you make us all sad? WHY!
I'M HERE FLUTTERSHY!!
wah.... im......speechless.....
For any story that I read that inspires emotion,
I have to say,
Thank you kind person.
I hate to admit I resisted the urge to cry, but I admit this is really dark and sad (and even more with the poor Fluttershy having ended like she did!)
I have to say too, I got scared at the first look of the image, I automatically scrolled up again, hehe
; but I scrolled down again to look clearly, and it confuses me, because you said "With her name she shall be remembered.". So I thought that you wrote her name instead, not Pokój (if I am right from what I searched, it means "room" in polish; or also "shalom" according to Wikipedia, which I am not sure about that).
This is a good work really, but I am not into this kind of sad tragedies (but it doesn't mean I don't like them).
Based on the picture, this story just looks like senseless sad rape, which does nothing for me. If anyone can tell me that this story is more than just 'feel bad for Fluttershy because she's sad' then I might give this a shot. But for now, I'm labeling it as another emotion whore that thinks sad=good and artistic.
And seriously, sad music? That's just fucking desperate. Not only that, but you chose Fluttershy. FLUTTERSHY. You could write a story about her getting a paper cut and it would be sad. It's just too easy. Or maybe the picture is just a placeholder and it's about someone else. I don't know, but I'm not willing to take the risk to find out. Again, if someone can tell me that this is more than just sad rape, then I'll read it.
Sorry, but you can't blame me for being cautious nowadays.
Oh sweet Luna..
I like one chapter sad stories like this and my little dashie. But this is just so sad!
Thank you all for the feed back!
1027476 It's neither
Keep looking. You'll figure it out :)
1027557 I promise you there is no rape involved at all. And also I didn't exactly "choose" Fluttershy. I saw the cover image on Reddit and it inspired me.
I am an American soldier. I've seen things that would normally shatter souls. People, friends, brothers in arms die in front of my eyes. Eventually you become emotionally detached. But this story, this is the first time in a long time I not only cried, but i remembered what it felt like to be human again.
thank you.
1028592 Wow I didn't know my story had such an effect on people. Thank you!
Marvelous story my friend
Pokój.... It means peace doesn't it?
Also, good story ^^
You really did this well, I almost couldn't believe what happened to Fluttershy. Watching you cause I wan to read anything you might write
Edit: You also might wanna think about getting an editor for this, there are a few mistakes that can distract you. Like "I decide to investigate the gay colored pavilion" you meant grey right? xD
1030861 Thanks! Great to know you liked it :). I actually do have an editor but he didn't edit this time (he edits for my other story). And that was actually correct. "Gay colored" because if you notice that Sweet Apple Acres is a bright pink so therefore im referencing towards "happy".
1030948 Ah, well okay then! thought you just missed an "r" there =P
1028489
First reaction: It's neither?! FFFFUUUUUUUU
After a while: It may be something starting with the "p" letter? Because everything would make a bit more sense.
1031878 *facehoof* Cough cough polish cough
EDIT: It's another definition than room
1031885
What do you think I did? Since the first comment I saw that was polish, otherwise I wouldn't have come out with the first two.
Guess I'm not that good figuring out things
1031916 DrgnWolf got it the first time. Just look through the comments.
Haven't you seen the "p" I wrote? I knew it was "peace" but I didn't want to spoil anything
1031933 Its ok, Drgnwolf already ruined it for everyone!
Anyways, what do you think that means for the story then?
1031941 I'm pretty sure that if I say it I might be stating the obvious. After all, it's pretty explicit in the final paragraph.
1032011 Valid point
Marvelous
Hehehee! I loved this story! Perfect for my sadistic tendencies and my general hate of Fluttershy.
1157322 Does it make me a bad person because I laughed at that comment?
1157486 Does it make me a bad person because I wrote that comment?
My eyes started to get wet as soon as I started reading the description and looking at the picture.
1027557 Dr Fumbles! My favorite GI Joe.
I have a feeling that the story would be a lot better and have a better chance at freeing the manly tears if it didn't go so fast, there wasn't as much spelling errors, and there was more to it. I'll favorite though, because for a reason I don't know, I want to. It was a decent story, I just didn't love it.
1160539 I was going for a very short to-the-point story and I didn't have my editor proof read it so that might explain some of the errors.
1161939 It's alright, I think it's a good story anyway. It's something for me to think about when I'm bored. I still don't see how Fluttershy died though. She was warm, and she ate something. Was it not enough, or was she sick? Or did I just miss something? Anyway, it's on my favorites list, so it was good enough to entertain me.
1162933 Well it makes me happy to know you enjoyed it. Maybe she was sick... or maybe.... just maybe... she wasn't real. but hey! That's crazy talk!
I'm crying right now... I never cry when I'm reading stories. Very well done, my friend. You have a true talent.
Why no happy ending?!
1188494 I no like happy endings
1188772 Music and fic is sad. I'm sad now.
1188802 Wait till my next story. x9001 the sads.
1188865 WHAT NINE-THOUSAND!?!?
1188891 IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!
4.bp.blogspot.com/-zNb8GGTK-HA/TqfpGrp57FI/AAAAAAAAA1k/4xS1oobD-gI/s1600/over9000.jpg
1188905 lol
Pokój means peace here, right?
1451396 yup
1451467 Double
! Well, I knew it was the translation which made more sense. And good story, there are actually many typos but the content is that of a good sad fic.
1451485 Only a few!
Great because I didn't have my editor take one look at it! Great to know you liked it!