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Hey, looks like it's soon now.

Oh god oh fuck its back

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I always try to please and improve

And poor Gallus, I could only imagine what they were doing to him. And poor Gallus - I could only begin to imagine the kinds of torment those manic ponies were subjecting the young griffon to, given the historically bloody relationship between those two were anywhere similar to my world's mythology.

Looks like you expanded the first sentence, but forgot to remove the original.

Yep, still felt like .

And missing a curse here. Or did Twilight not like your language here?

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oh boy, I thought corrected that. Thank you so much for the catch there

wow, thought that this was destined to not update for a good while longer, and here it is. Really nice story you got going here

Thanks for the update!