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well, some miss spelling here and there but other than that (very minor I can easily ignore them)
you have me hooked and I will be waiting for more (although it could do with a bit of slowing down but I have a feeling that is the reason you had it jump to 3 years later)
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Thank you, If you see any errors in my story please tell me so i may fixed them. Hope you enjoy the story.
"Displayed" Prince Vegita?
He's not naked, for starters...
Not a good choice as a Displaced to be honest, especially if you plan to make him op.
straight to the point.
ok I like it.
Gonna add this to my read later and wait for more Chapters, once (IF) you hit Five chapters I will read it and give my Opinion
Low key overdone.
Like, even in the sea that is Displaced (So much so that I have to acknowledge it as a fucking genre.) there's been "OP Dragon Ball Z character goes to Equestria and fucks shit up."
Like have you ever heard of isekai anime? Because that's the same general concept. Except better, mostly. Hell, I'd pay for some That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime x MLP fanfiction, considering that both shows have the same general tone about befriending people. Both shows also have the benefit of being good and not riding on nostalgia...
But uhh, yeah. A DBZ Displaced. Originality is at an all time low here. Roll on the death of the fandom?
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What I think is silly about Displaced is how often you can cut and paste character names from another series and *insert item names here* and it's basically the same thing in the prologue, just maybe change one one-liner or two before they get to Equestria, and you wouldn't notice the difference.
Also, I'm not an expert on cosplaying, but how likely would it be to run into people wearing a Shepherd and Makarov costume? I assume not very, I could be wrong though.
That being said, got a chuckle or two out of me, but for the wrong reasons probably.
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Funnier still is when you make said “changes” and the general reaction from fans of these stories is that it’s the most groundbreaking story ever written.
...You have peaked my interest. :3
Do F@cking more please thank you