Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but nothing could ever kill me.
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A good start, but you are in need of a proof reader, as there are some errors. (displaced, displayed instead of dressed. custom instead of costume.)
All of your images doesn't work
You have a few spelling errors.
Goku , Vegeta , Gohan , Trunk and Majin Buuu .......... why Majin Buu I thought all Saiyan races should be interesting and why not use Brory , Bardock , Nappa , Raditz , Turles , Tarble , Cabba , Caulifla , Kale , Bra , pan , Goten that all and do full blood saiyan if you like .
I'm so sorry to say that because too curious and I don't know what exactly this story is look like but is your way can do .
Spelling.
hiatus already? that's too bad..
So many spelling errors, so little plot!
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