Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but nothing could ever kill me.
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Oh no!...When a quarter of the chapter is given to describing his physical appearance, that's how you know this is going to be bad. I skimmed over this part when I read it. Before this, I was quickly skimming over it, trying my best to find out if the author was a troll or not. Then, suddenly, this wall of text smacks me in the face and I go stumbling. Don't you just hate it when a person just keeps talking and talking and talking about something useless and creating a wall of text that no one will read! You'd think they'd stop after a while, but they just keep on talking! You start to wonder, "What's wrong with this idiot?" But noooo, they just keep on talking long after anyone's interested. People who talk all the time without taking a break to legibly speak always get on my nerves!
Maybe they're just not very self-aware.
...Which is another thing that gets on my nerves!
Welp, guess this guy doesn't listen to advice... How many displaced are you gonna waste your time making anyhow? You ever gonna try and focus on only one and make some progress? Another issue you'll be causing is killing reader's interest since you never update or finish what you started.
9587889
You sorely underestimate the general memory span of the Displaced fandom.
9587907
There is a difference between the bad side of a fandom and the good side of the fandom. What we have here, is the bad side of the fandom.
Sorry man but you need some real work. Maybe start by updating the others?
Oh boy, another one.
Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor