Great chapter I really liked seeing the two of them just interact and talk to one another. I think the funniest thing is Rarity really REALLY doesn't know what she is doing. Spike is a loaded cannon and she keep teasing the fuse. He is a HUGE pile of sexually repressed desire tied in a VERY tight knot. He has been wanting, needing, desiring her for SOOO long and now he has her teasing him none stop. I can't wait to see when he gets more comfortable to start to return her teasing and actions. Even more so when he finally can't take it anymore and snaps. The two of them are going to go missing for like a week when they both lose it lol. And I think the biggest thing is it will best chance trigger some dragon instinct and he will want Rarity to be HIS, he want want her to be HIS mate, and even more so he will want to breed her. I honestly can't wait to see how Rarity would react to hearing him say something like that.

I get the feeling half her shop will be wreaked from their rough dragon/vamp matting, and for the whole block everypony around will be hearing them lol. I do just hope Spike start to get more comfortable with Rarity and being intimate even if he is still a powder keg getting bigger and bigger every time she teasing him. I think Rarity would love to see the lust and want in his eyes growing as he look at her knowing he could just ravish her at any moment. These two are going to be the couple who can't keep their hands/hoofs off each other and can't stop fucking every second they are alone lol. I wouldn't be shocked if down the road they bring Coco to be their little pet since she give off SUPER sub vibes lol.

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Thank you, I appreciate your kind comments and how well that you are enjoying this tale. I did truly love having these two simply sitting and speaking with one another about their concerns and their pasts. I also loved including how Opal knows and doesn't care if Rarity is a vampire or not, as long as she feeds her.

Oh, Rarity knows exactly what she is doing. She knows what happened on Spike's birthday, knows how powerful that dragons are, wishes for him to know that she will be there for him and wishes for him to know that he doesn't need to fret about injuring her. Don't doubt that she isn't a powerful creature in her own right, we simply haven't seen quite yet how able that she is. The alabaster unicorn is obviously strong if by simply breathing in and focusing, she can see the blood coursing through the hundreds of ponies within Ponyville; however, the next chapter will show her abilities as both a magical unicorn and as a lithesome vampire.

It has been a rather large build up to their passionate moments, hasn't it? I didn't expect to be including such an amount of flirting or barely contained sexual tension between these two; certainly not when I first began this story. I also didn't expect to see how much desire that there would be to see them interacting and making love, at least not quite this fast. I only published this tale on the thirtieth of October. Spike will be more comfortable, yet having his lady's attentions at last will not entirely eliminate his abashed and timid nature. Rarity purely has that effect on him and they both like it in equal measure, but he has been learning to be more cozy with her, in this chapter alone.

On another notion, how did you enjoy hearing about Rarity's past? Did you like how resourceful that she is about going to the hospital for supplies and such?

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OH I get it and I think everything has been working so far. I think that is their dynamic and they both enjoy it. Rarity is a flirt and a tease to Spike and he enjoys having her attention and showing her how much she means to him. I think it really works for the two of them. I do think tho from the angle of a male, even tho I am nowhere near as timid as Spike, you keep poking a teddy he WILL turn into a Grizzly or in this case a dragon on you. But like you said I honestly think that is what Rarity wants and is SOOOO looking forward to when Spike reaches his limit lol. Oh I know they both are powerful creatures for sure even more so since Rarity can feed now, that is why I am sure once they reach the point they are going to start to be intimate they are going to break ALOT of shit and make alot of noise lol.

I think the build up to it is great since rushing it will make it feel more like a clop story than a romance story. And it is funny to me because as I see it as much as the readers want them together I feel they want it SOOOO much more if Rarity's inner thoughts and Spike's physical reactions are anything to go by lol. I will be shocked if Rarity makes it out of the year without being knocked up with how I picture the two of them going at it like to predators in heat lol. She will be doing alot of 'unladylike' things and Spike will find his dominate side for sure lol.

I think her past works out very well and it explaining how come no one caught on, mostly her family, that she was a vamp and that she was most likely born a vamp and it just developed as time went on for her. Having it be more of a natural thing instead of a Supernatural thing really works to me. I personally view it as a mutation or a alternate version of a unicorn seeing how she was born as this and wasn't turned. I do want to see how Spike react to being offered blood and how he react to tasting some. As a creature naturally favoring eating meat drinking blood might have a interesting reaction to him.

Lol funny scene just popped into my head for Spike and Rarity for after they reach the intimate level.

i agree with everything you say DragonPony, just without Coo(not that i dont like her or anything, just rather it be just them lol) i just got this little bit in my head when you said "These two are going to be the couple who can't keep their hands/hoofs off each other". Is it wrong that i can picture in my head on ther first long(very Long lol) night together all of Ponyville will be able to hear them throughout the night & in the morning they open the door to see twi & the others standing there looking a mess, Twi with a crazy look/eye twich. Screams in a Canterlot voice that the next time they do it to use a soundproof barrier, then they all walk off & spike just shouts thanks for the tip big sis your the best, how about round 2 my lady, door slams shut & then all you hear is twi scream gross(in a fun sis way lol) hahaha

Enjoying as always so thanks for the new chapter, always enjoy reading your stuff & thanks for the fast releases to

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Oh & i know it dont matter Victoria the dragoness but, im a guy :) just never botherd changing the pic, i just remembered on 1 of your replys you wasnt sure, so glad i could help & theres no rush of course but i cant wait for more hahaha thanks again for the storry so far... Oh & before i forget thanks for the info "chapter twenty-nine of HSDS posted soon. I yet have so much to edit and adjust." Cant wait, why do you keep doing this to me Victoria the dragoness, your killing me making me wait, but on the plus side if i die Rarity can make me a vamp, then i can wait forever hahaha thanks

I do wonder if Rarity also desires her friends. The reason it was one of the phrases in the previous chapters.
This might be an estimated guess but what if Rarity's Vampire transformation was due to some type of magical item. Since she wasn't bitten or "Blade born" and neither of her family was much of a scientist, it seems that there was probably a magical item/trinket that may have contain some precious gems in which she was not aware and slowly transform her.

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Yeah I always enjoy reading your stories, don't know what it is but I just really enjoy reading your stories on spike & rarity. Think it's because the way you write them, you seem to be able to write stories on spike & rarity that make them great characters to read about & the way they interact with each other is just brilliant (couldn't think of any other word lol) it's hard not to enjoy your stories about them when you give them such great personalities & yeah I'm gonna stop now lol I guess all I can really say is thanks for the stories, keep up the great work.

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Thank you. I am glad that you enjoy my characterizations of Rarity and Spike and their interactions so thoroughly. Truly, it is great to read that I bring my two favorite characters to life so well. It helps that I relate to Rarity and Spike, so I know how they are. The rest I simply try to maintain their appearance in the show.

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That is an interesting conjecture. I am happy to read how my tales make people ponder through events, so thank you for the comment.

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Excellent; that is exactly how they behave with one another. Oh, yet both of them mean well, of course. Rarity would never do anything to injure Spike and he wouldn't bring her to harm either. Their moment will occur, fret not. Rarity and Spike are already becoming accustomed to one another and with that comfort, the proper lady will allow more of her flirtatious and vivacious side to show. Rarity has a solution for the noise issue also.

Well, excellent. This is not a clop story, so I am glad that you see the difference. I am also thrilled that it hasn't appeared rushed to any extent. That was one of my concerns. Oh yes, both of them have desired after one another for such a long time; not only due to the hints and ministrations that both of them gave in these five chapters, yet from their actions since the two of them met.

If you wonder about all of the times that Spike has helped Rarity and that Rarity has spent alone time with Spike, on gem journeys, carrying groceries and clothes, helping within her shop, before all of this occurred, then supplementary it becomes astounding that these two lived with one another with these secrets for so long. They have tremendous will power. Well, they won't be performing anything too outlandish, yet I can see that both of them can be dominant, as it were.

Precisely, I am glad that you enjoy my rendition of the vampire for Rarity. It isn't only that it has been altered so much as Rarity has adapted it to her as well. I imagined that it was a nice change from the usual issues in regard to how vampires are some how not revealed when they are initially born and during subsequent visits to hospitals.

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Yes, Coco is not going to be in my stories in that sense, if she is at all. Well, it isn't wrong, I suppose. It sounds humorous in a sense, yet Rarity does already have a solution for the noise issue, as I told Dragonpony prior.

I see; very well. I hope that I wasn't offensive. When I am uncertain of who I am writing to, I simply refer to people as "he or she" to be considerate. Well then, I am thrilled to let you know that chapter twenty-nine for HSDS is indeed published now. Yes, the alabaster unicorn could return you to life; although then you would need to listen to her if she asked something of you.

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Thanks for the reply :) Yeah you really do bring them to life(for me at least), the way they work off each other in your stories just always puts a smile on my face, while i read. so thanks :) as for "Rarity does already have a solution for the noise issue, as I told Dragonpony prior." i must of missed that sorry :)

dont worry about the he/she thing i wasn't offended at all :) i found it quite nice that you go out your way to say he or she :) i just thought i'd let ya know is all, As for chapter twenty-nine of HSDS, I've red it already. it was a great chapter thanks :) looking forward to seeing where both these great stories go, Thank you for putting so much time into these stories for us all to enjoy :)

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"Yes, the alabaster unicorn could return you to life; although then you would need to listen to her if she asked something of you." Im not seeing the down side to that :p

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I am glad that the characters remain believable, even if in this case one of them is a vampire and the other is an older dragon. They protect and watch over one another. There is no need to apologize; I only replied to Dragonpony's message moments prior to writing my answer to yours.

Excellent. After having written my response to your comment, I wish to read it again for myself in fact.

I don't see the deficit to it either, I was merely uncertain whether you would be alright with such an event as well, that is all.

So is she a Daywalker?

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She can stroll about Equestria at any time of day or night, as has been shown in the second chapter.

I can’t wait for Ch.6

Please continue this story!

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Dear me, I can't believe that I didn't answer this. My apologies, dear.

Unfortunately, I do not know when I will continue this tale. I simply wanted to write something to present for Halloween last year. I already had this thought of and written largely, but I stopped after the thirty-first of October. It was a tad hard to write a chapter every day; quite draining, actually. Yet I don't mean to abandon this story, do not misconstrue that, because I do know how this will continue and end.

Thank you for your response and interest, dear Spikethedragonx95,

Victoria

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Oh, I will, do not fret Infamous Paradox. I do know how this will end. I don't think that it will need too many more chapters to be complete. I simply needed to rest, as it were and I haven't returned to it until now. I wanted to write something for Halloween last year, but writing a chapter every day is rather tiring.

Thank you for enjoying my story enough to write something, dear,

Victoria

I love this!

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Thank you so much. Goodness, you will make me blush.

Very good story so far! Excellent characterization, especially for Rarity, and nice sense of detail.

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Thank you, that means much. I do love writing for Rarity. Forgive me, it has been a while since I read this. What details do you mean, dear?

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Just a general sense of Rarity's appreciation for aesthetics comes through thanks to your atmospheric prose. Wish I could manage those sorts of details.

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Well, thank you. It is truly about practice and study; learning new words and finding alternate styles of writing. This is how I show my thoughts and feelings most clearly and hopefully bring joy to others, so I put all of my heart into it, as it were.