The haunting season may be fun and games for the majority of residents of Ponyville, yet for one lithe alabaster unicorn, only three of those nights are what she awaits each year; the only three that she deems that it is safe to leave her home.
You did a great job with this chapter. It set up alot of things. It showed that Spike honestly only lived because he was a dragon and due to his larger size has more blood than the average pony. It showed how much she struggled with all of this and how much Spike cares. Also really like you didn't make Spike always have the perfect thing to say or be super smooth but the intent was always there. I think she should let him rest right now before sex or anything crazy. Even with what he said he did lose alot of blood. I wouldn't mind seeing them go on a date and they talk about everything, their feelings, where they go from here, her vampire side, Spikes own struggles with his instincts. Than they go home and have a wild passionate night, it would be fun to see her not having to hold back but her also telling Spike he doesn't have to hold back. From their talk she knows he spends his whole life holding back everything, power, instincts, alot,. But with her and her stronger camp body she can take all he has been holding back. He loves her for her and all she is, she want to do the same for him
Great chapter thanks, really liking it :) was this one of the stories you mentioned before when you said you had other stories but wasn't sure about posting them, if so glad you did :) also i would agree with DragonPony on what he said, "i would like to see them go on a date & talk about their feelings, where they go from here, her vampire side, Spikes own struggles with his instincts", that sounds like it could be good. Im also 100% behind the not having to hold back & her also telling Spike he doesn't have to hold back. I think finding out that spikes been holding back on everything, like DragonPony said. power,instincts & all the other stuff would be great. I like the idea of becuase shes a vampire, they can be together all their lives & not having to hold back with one another would be great.
Just had an idea from reading this chapter/reading DragonPonys post but what if, celestia (luna after being freed) have known about Rarity since the begining & set it up so that when twi went there to free luna from nightmare, she sent spike to be there for rarity/himself knowing that spike was a dragon & rarity wouldnt have to worry as much as she would about feeding off of spike as she would a pony & would be able to spend there lives together. (of course spike was going to go any ways but maybe something like she hoped they would end up together lol) & maybe having everyone find out at some point but being ok/still friends would be the best ending hahaha
again thats just an idea/what i was thinking lol but im sure you have your own ideas where/how you want this story to go but by all means if any of this sounds like it could be useful, then feel free lol
as always love your stories & keep up the great work :)
P.S. also DragonPony hope it was ok that i used some of your text from your post, just really liked what you said as they were really good ideas/had the same sort of thoughts :)
9267769 Your idea is interesting for sure. I think that one huge thing could be that Luna was the first or at least the goddess of the vamp pony. I mean she could have some in her night guard. She isn't a monster but now just a different kind of pony. If she was like the classic vamp she wouldn't have aged at all. It could be vamps age SUPER slow once they reach maturity. Rarity have never had anyone to teach her to be a vamp or to help explain things. Luna could be that for her.
9267827 thats an interesting idea, the idea of aging slow makes sense & still makes it so rarity & spike can be together :) having luna be the goddess of vamps works out also as she is the priness of the night hehehe. Having some in her guard would be interesting also, the idea of having luna teacher her about vampires is a good one i think :) I guess we could throw in what happend to her parents aswell, as nothing about them being alive or dead has been mentioned(i dont think, unless i forgot about it :p )
9267846 Yea in the canon her parents are still alive. That is where Sweetie lives most of the time. I think her parents not knowing would be interesting since it could have her coming out to her family and that would be interesting. Oh OHHH what if Rarity is a stronger than normal vamp, due to her time as nightmare Rarity. She was only able to become it due to her being a vamp but when she changed it super charged her a bit. With training she could even go back to her nightmare look. Kinda like her own super vamp form lol
9268033 some every good ideas indeed, what i ment about her parents tho is that, altho they are alive in canno. in this story they were alive when she was a kid(shes been around for awhile remember lol), so makes me think that they are 1:vampires themselfs & just not with her atm or 2:they died years ago & as no mention of sweetie has been made yet, then maybe shes been using her powers on sweetie/family to make believe that shes there sis/daughter sort of thing(hope you see what im trying to say lol) but as for the nightmare Rarity thing, im liking. so many good ideas hehehe
guess as readers we're just gonna have to sit back & wait to see what Victoria the dragoness has planed.
tho it dosnt hurt to throw out some fun ideas hahaha
heres hoping for another fun/interesting chaper to come cant wait :)
Thank you, I was quite vehement on perfecting this chapter, considering that it does indeed deal with a variety of matters. Emotions are high, yet not too high as to appear unrealistic. Yes, Rarity did indeed struggle, yet she still managed to control herself. If it wasn't for Spike, she would have likely managed, at least for the remainder of this occasion. Yes, indeed, I imagine that I would be saying the same things to Rarity as he did, so that aided in fashioning his dialogue.
It is one of the tales; one of the oldest ones I believe. This was before the Scare Master, I had this idea after Rarity didn't appear during the first Nightmare Night episode. I am glad to see others conversing on my tales; sharing ideas and such.
Yet I am happy to read your predictions nonetheless. It simply shows that I am writing well enough to allow you to imagine what will occur and that is worth reading.
These are all quite intriguing ideas. Yet she did say that no vampires have been documented in two thousand years, before either princess were about, or, at least in power. Rarity's family tree will also be discussed in detail in the next chapter. Once again, I am happy to see the conversation between you two; mulling over ideas and the like.
9269227 well glad you started posting this story, as im sure you can see myself & DragonPony are enjoying the story & coming up with ideas hahaha. Im quite intrigued about Rarity's family tree so looking forward to the next chapter :) & as always loving sparity lol cant wait to see whats to come
9269252 I think you might be a bit off there. I mean I think Luna was trapped on the moon for a thousand years, I just double checked, so they were ruling for over a thousand years. Which I think then makes sense that they stopped being documented around that time because that is the time Luna was gone. So it could be that Rarity is the first Vamp pony to be made since Luna's banishment. But I am happy to hear more of Rarity's family and get some more clues on where this Vamp gene came from
You are correct; yet I did incorporate her banishment into this tale. Although, in my other story I said that they were about for around two thousand years. They were not around during the first one thousand years of the Crystal Empire's reign (at least not until King Sombra took over about one thousand five hundred years before the present in the show), which was stated to be three thousand years ago, one thousand years prior to either sister. So I shall correct it to three thousand years because I would be contradicting my other story despite it not being related to this one and because for Luna to be a vampire wouldn't make sense, at least to me. It would defeat the purpose of the story, since Rarity is meant to be the only one remaining, all of the other vampires having turned to dust thousands of years ago. She made especially certain.
I can. It is delightful to see my readers conversing and fashioning conjecture, rather intriguing conjecture, mind. I am happy that you are yet enjoying the tale.
I believe that Rarity drank more than a pure taste of dragon blood and Spike finally realized how the alabaster unicorn truly behaves, at the least with her dragon, that is. I imagine that you are enjoying this Halloween tale, yes?
You did a great job with this chapter. It set up alot of things. It showed that Spike honestly only lived because he was a dragon and due to his larger size has more blood than the average pony. It showed how much she struggled with all of this and how much Spike cares. Also really like you didn't make Spike always have the perfect thing to say or be super smooth but the intent was always there. I think she should let him rest right now before sex or anything crazy. Even with what he said he did lose alot of blood. I wouldn't mind seeing them go on a date and they talk about everything, their feelings, where they go from here, her vampire side, Spikes own struggles with his instincts. Than they go home and have a wild passionate night, it would be fun to see her not having to hold back but her also telling Spike he doesn't have to hold back. From their talk she knows he spends his whole life holding back everything, power, instincts, alot,. But with her and her stronger camp body she can take all he has been holding back. He loves her for her and all she is, she want to do the same for him
Great chapter thanks, really liking it :) was this one of the stories you mentioned before when you said you had other stories but wasn't sure about posting them, if so glad you did :) also i would agree with DragonPony on what he said, "i would like to see them go on a date & talk about their feelings, where they go from here, her vampire side, Spikes own struggles with his instincts", that sounds like it could be good. Im also 100% behind the not having to hold back & her also telling Spike he doesn't have to hold back. I think finding out that spikes been holding back on everything, like DragonPony said. power,instincts & all the other stuff would be great. I like the idea of becuase shes a vampire, they can be together all their lives & not having to hold back with one another would be great.
Just had an idea from reading this chapter/reading DragonPonys post but what if, celestia (luna after being freed) have known about Rarity since the begining & set it up so that when twi went there to free luna from nightmare, she sent spike to be there for rarity/himself knowing that spike was a dragon & rarity wouldnt have to worry as much as she would about feeding off of spike as she would a pony & would be able to spend there lives together. (of course spike was going to go any ways but maybe something like she hoped they would end up together lol) & maybe having everyone find out at some point but being ok/still friends would be the best ending hahaha
again thats just an idea/what i was thinking lol but im sure you have your own ideas where/how you want this story to go but by all means if any of this sounds like it could be useful, then feel free lol
as always love your stories & keep up the great work :)
P.S.
also DragonPony hope it was ok that i used some of your text from your post, just really liked what you said as they were really good ideas/had the same sort of thoughts :)
9267769
Your idea is interesting for sure. I think that one huge thing could be that Luna was the first or at least the goddess of the vamp pony. I mean she could have some in her night guard. She isn't a monster but now just a different kind of pony. If she was like the classic vamp she wouldn't have aged at all. It could be vamps age SUPER slow once they reach maturity. Rarity have never had anyone to teach her to be a vamp or to help explain things. Luna could be that for her.
9267827
thats an interesting idea, the idea of aging slow makes sense & still makes it so rarity & spike can be together :) having luna be the goddess of vamps works out also as she is the priness of the night hehehe. Having some in her guard would be interesting also, the idea of having luna teacher her about vampires is a good one i think :) I guess we could throw in what happend to her parents aswell, as nothing about them being alive or dead has been mentioned(i dont think, unless i forgot about it :p )
9267846
Yea in the canon her parents are still alive. That is where Sweetie lives most of the time. I think her parents not knowing would be interesting since it could have her coming out to her family and that would be interesting. Oh OHHH what if Rarity is a stronger than normal vamp, due to her time as nightmare Rarity. She was only able to become it due to her being a vamp but when she changed it super charged her a bit. With training she could even go back to her nightmare look. Kinda like her own super vamp form lol
9268033
some every good ideas indeed, what i ment about her parents tho is that, altho they are alive in canno. in this story they were alive when she was a kid(shes been around for awhile remember lol), so makes me think that they are 1:vampires themselfs & just not with her atm or 2:they died years ago & as no mention of sweetie has been made yet, then maybe shes been using her powers on sweetie/family to make believe that shes there sis/daughter sort of thing(hope you see what im trying to say lol) but as for the nightmare Rarity thing, im liking. so many good ideas hehehe
guess as readers we're just gonna have to sit back & wait to see what Victoria the dragoness has planed.
tho it dosnt hurt to throw out some fun ideas hahaha
heres hoping for another fun/interesting chaper to come cant wait :)
9267616
Thank you, I was quite vehement on perfecting this chapter, considering that it does indeed deal with a variety of matters. Emotions are high, yet not too high as to appear unrealistic. Yes, Rarity did indeed struggle, yet she still managed to control herself. If it wasn't for Spike, she would have likely managed, at least for the remainder of this occasion. Yes, indeed, I imagine that I would be saying the same things to Rarity as he did, so that aided in fashioning his dialogue.
9267769
It is one of the tales; one of the oldest ones I believe. This was before the Scare Master, I had this idea after Rarity didn't appear during the first Nightmare Night episode. I am glad to see others conversing on my tales; sharing ideas and such.
Yet I am happy to read your predictions nonetheless. It simply shows that I am writing well enough to allow you to imagine what will occur and that is worth reading.
9268033
These are all quite intriguing ideas. Yet she did say that no vampires have been documented in two thousand years, before either princess were about, or, at least in power. Rarity's family tree will also be discussed in detail in the next chapter. Once again, I am happy to see the conversation between you two; mulling over ideas and the like.
9269227
well glad you started posting this story, as im sure you can see myself & DragonPony are enjoying the story & coming up with ideas hahaha. Im quite intrigued about Rarity's family tree so looking forward to the next chapter :) & as always loving sparity lol cant wait to see whats to come
Thanks & keep up the great work :)
9269252
I think you might be a bit off there. I mean I think Luna was trapped on the moon for a thousand years, I just double checked, so they were ruling for over a thousand years. Which I think then makes sense that they stopped being documented around that time because that is the time Luna was gone. So it could be that Rarity is the first Vamp pony to be made since Luna's banishment. But I am happy to hear more of Rarity's family and get some more clues on where this Vamp gene came from
9269762
You are correct; yet I did incorporate her banishment into this tale. Although, in my other story I said that they were about for around two thousand years. They were not around during the first one thousand years of the Crystal Empire's reign (at least not until King Sombra took over about one thousand five hundred years before the present in the show), which was stated to be three thousand years ago, one thousand years prior to either sister. So I shall correct it to three thousand years because I would be contradicting my other story despite it not being related to this one and because for Luna to be a vampire wouldn't make sense, at least to me. It would defeat the purpose of the story, since Rarity is meant to be the only one remaining, all of the other vampires having turned to dust thousands of years ago. She made especially certain.
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I can. It is delightful to see my readers conversing and fashioning conjecture, rather intriguing conjecture, mind. I am happy that you are yet enjoying the tale.
She got a taste of dragonblood.
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I believe that Rarity drank more than a pure taste of dragon blood and Spike finally realized how the alabaster unicorn truly behaves, at the least with her dragon, that is. I imagine that you are enjoying this Halloween tale, yes?