This is still very interesting for sure. It is something to see just how much Rarity is craving Spike and he is none the wiser about it. To be frank I was kinda hoping to see a predator Spike to be paired up with this huntress Rarity. But super innocent and nice Spike works as well since this is clearly more of a Rarity centered story. I wonder what she will do noticing how strong her instincts are. I think she has only a few options. The one I can see her doing is trying to come out and confess to Spike, and worse case if he doesn't take it well she will get rid of his memories and than move away to keep everyone safe.

thanks for the new chapter, poor rarity :( i just hope that it all works out/happy ending, something like spike/everyone knew all along & were ok with it/ waited for her to say something

as always enjoying the story, thank you :)

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Shall I take that as a curious hm, a disappointed hm or simply an uncertain hm? It is difficult to surmise, yet the fact that it is quite brief leads me to speculate the second or the third.

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Well, that certainly is lovely to hear that you can read it through again. I also appreciate your trust in me to fashion intriguing tales; it warms my heart, as does pony blood. Oh my, did I say that one aloud? Well, no matter; you won't recall a thing once I am finished.

Do not fret, Spikey-Wikey will be present in short order. This is his tale as much as it is Rarity's.

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My apologies for the late response. The second chapter simply garnered my undivided attention all day yesterday and I truly wished to have it presentable earlier than what was shown.

I am elated to know that you find this tale interesting. I wasn't certain how viewers would like it, given how many other Sparity stories that I have posted here as of yet. There are even more to arrive as well; however, I digress. That is quite the intriguing notion. Don't go pondering that it yet couldn't occur in some fashion. Spike also has a major role in this and I will attempt to have two more chapters posted for this special night of ours.

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Thank you, I appreciate that you took the time to write a reply. I am honestly surprised with how swiftly the comments and views are gliding in. It is satiating in a way. In that case, I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.

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Thank you. Honestly, it was not like this when I first fashioned this tale. It did not have the emotional ending that this chapter has now. I was truly tearing up having to write most of Rarity's inner thoughts, since I can relate to her fears to some extent and imagined for a moment that I would have to add a sad or tragedy tag.

I don't see how this chapter defeats that notion. We know that despite her quite lovely disposition when with Spike, Rarity also has a dark and lustful side. Who is to say whether Spike has his demons in some regard, yet has no need to try to conceal them while the alabaster unicorn is with him? Hopefully the next two chapters will assuage the worries, which you have written here.

Don't believe that Spike isn't important. This is a tale for both Rarity and Spike.

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Yes, I was shedding tears writing her inner thoughts, especially about not deserving Spike. I relate to her fears.

You are quite welcome. Thank you for the kind words and imaginings.

Looks like falling in love accelerated the process.

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It indeed appears that way.