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Victoria_the_dragoness
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Got to read & do something with these damn hiatus breaks in the season. . .
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Nice drawing. That's cool. I have to start practicing my Spike and Rarity too. I have drawn them together once already, but with older Spike. With all these chapters coming out, I will be drawing them constantly.
I hope you enjoyed the first chapter. :)
6199215 sure did.
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Glad to hear it. And another cool picture.
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Why thank you...I think. Frankly, I do not know how to respond to that. Yes, Rarity likes what she sees, but I do not see where the Rainbow Dash comment comes from.
Still, I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
I really enjoyed this chapter and the story thus far. I thought having Pinkie assuage Spike's fears was a really good decision, having Twilight do it seemed a bit too predictable. I must also compliment the vocabulary you employ throughout the story, it's very smart and makes reading the story quite a bit more enjoyable than the standard fair.
Another great chapter I await the next one.
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Thank you very much. I thought Pinkie would be a good character to help Spike along as well. She just has that sort of spirit, I suppose. My favourite part of chapter 4 actually was when Pinkie said, "I'm looking at you, I just don't see what the problem is". I thought that was such a good line for her to have, because I believe she wouldn't care what anypony looked like as long as they were nice.
And thank you for complimenting my vocabulary as well. I take words and phrases from authors like J.R.R. Tolkien and George R.R. Martin to make the story sound more like an actual novel. Spike has been an ambassador for over two years at this point, and should have a more refined manner of speaking just like Rarity. I also just really love finding more complex words to put in my stories. I also hope you have enjoyed the last four chapters as much as this one. Have you checked out the drawings on my Deviantart profile? It's under the same name.
Thank you once again (finally some helpful comments xD) and I look forward to reading about the reaction to one of my personal favourite chapters next Sunday. Have a splendid afternoon! Ta ta! ^^
GG
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Thank you. However, I'm sitting right beside you.
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Wow stalker much? Good lord.
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I arrived here with you. There was no stalking involved.
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Please don't consume my soul.
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How horrid. I would never.
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ouch
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I am uncertain as to which part you refer to in chapter 16. After all, there are a lot of parts in this chapter that could have the word "ouch" attached to them, unless of course you mean ouch to the whole thing. There are many important things going on here and I am most happy to have been able to illustrate my vision for this chapter so well, so thank you for the comment.
Nice picture above too. ^^
6356427 dropping out of the sky at the end Rarity & Spikey Ouch
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Spikey doesn't like pain and neither do I
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Ah! Yes, that would be an appropriate word to use for such a scene. I had figured that you meant that part, but did not want to assume.
There will be a lot of pain in the future, Rarity, but I'm sure that you and Spike will be able to handle it together. Be strong.
Patience you three fillies. There are still many more parts to this story, but I shall get around to it. I know this story in and out, from start to finish. Hopefully, it will be a grand adventure for all of those involved.
Why does this story have a mature rating? If there is sex, then add a sex tag.
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Oh, I was just being cautious about the story because of chapter 11. I'm not really sure which equates to a Teen or Mature rating on here, so I was just being sure.
You can't hide from the pink eye!
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Precisely. I think Rarity has figured that out as well, having spent four years sewing and spending time with her. I am not sure of everyone else, though Spike may also have a good idea about that sort of thing. I hope this chapter was to your liking. I know it's not Rarity or Spike, though Rarity was in it as a flashback, but I need to catch up with this side of the story as well, before continuing with the unicorn and dragon.
6770315 I enjoyed it very well- thank you
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Well, I'm glad. You are truly welcome.
Oh no, what are those three doing with Spike now? They had better not upset Rarity. She'll be unhappy if her dragon is in danger.
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6771066 In my story 'Marked' those three are shoving Spike to Rarity causing real trouble . . .
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Interesting. I will have to have a look at this story.
The first fic I read that had Button's mom in it, her name was Love Tap, so sometimes it weird to call her by any other name
I'm liking this fic so far, I'll favorite it when I finish the other chapters, but for now have a like.
Funny thing is that there's no comments on most chapters, huh.
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Oh, I didn't know that she actually had a name. I looked all over searching for the proper name for the character, but I couldn't find any. It was always Button's Mom or Linda or some other one, but it's nice to know that she actually has one.
I am glad that you are enjoying the story so far. Thank you for the like and the comment too, it's most appreciated. I am rather disappointed with the lack of comments as well on this, but I suppose you have to deal with it. I must be doing something wrong with the presentation.
Anyway, thank you again for the comment and for reading. I hope that you continue to like the story.
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Uh, bro, sis, whatever, Luna talks using the old equish, yes. But it's been 4 years since her returning, and in the show she's talking "normally" after her visit on Nightmare Night.
Like I said, she still have her slip ups here and there, but she doesn't talk like that all the time, not anymore. This chapter felt a little weird to me because of that, but it made me want the next chapter as always
*sigh* every time I make a comment like that I feel like I'm being an asshole...
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I know and I apologize that this chapter was weird to you. I just liked thinking that Luna would keep her old way of speaking from before she became Nightmare Moon. I thought that she might develop a way of speaking that included both her old way and the new way as well, because she occasionally uses "you" instead of "thou" in this chapter. She only really uses it when with ponies she knows, like her sister.
And no you were not being cruel by speaking your mind. I do understand where you're coming from and I know that you are not trying to be rude. I liked the way that she spoke in this though. It separated her and made her unique, but you are correct that it doesn't fit into the show's canon. I'll think about it. Hopefully the next chapter will be more to your liking.
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Sweet picture Hillbe and I always find your comments amusing. Did you enjoy the chapter?
6796816 I don't have to change it just because of one reader, if you like to do this way, then continue. It was just my opinion and probably half of the readers like the way you did. I just thought that you made her use the old equish a bit too much.
6796816 you don't have to change it just because of one reader, if you like to do this way, then continue. It was just my opinion and probably half of the readers like the way you did. I just thought that you made her use the old equish a bit too much.
6796837 Yes it's a grand trip this story of yours.
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I appreciate that.
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Thank you, that means a lot. Yet another funny picture too. OctoRarity must be pretty darn good at massages.
Well... Shit.
6816702 Those two are in quite the difficult situation, hmm? Definitely with Rarity's back being broken.
Ummm.... "Like Fine Wine." Some parts are almost word for word. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2851/like-fine-wine
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Yes, I did use that and other such stories for help writing that part. I'm not all that accustomed to writing those scenes. I don't do them too often, but I tried to make it my own by putting my own thoughts into the scene and completely altering what happens as well.
Spike's anatomy is based off of some reptiles, which I learned during college, so that's not really copying. Everything else I made fit in with what was happening and what had occurred earlier in the story, and I thought I wrote enough on my own to make it new.
I didn't mean any disrespect to any of the fictions I took inspiration from and Like Fine Wine is one of my favourite stories out there. It was inspiration for this story in fact, sort of. I hope knowing that didn't take anything away from the experience of reading this; it truly wasn't my intent.
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I can tell you had fun with that one. That's the longest comment you've sent me. I suppose it fits with the chapter length. I was wondering if you would write something soon actually, and it hasn't disappointed. Glad to hear from you again. But I assure you, no bed sheets were harmed in the making of their "mutant babies".
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Geesh Spike I wanted dragon relations to improve with your trip...
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Relations have improved with one pony and dragon anyway. It's a start.
Rarity being so damn horny is kind of amusing but I also really found it to be out of place, just because of how unsure she is of everything. Everything else is great though, especially the inner thoughts on how she feels.
Personal thing for me is you wouldn't call a comic a "five part comic series." That would be a five issue mini series. But it's just a personal nitpick of kine, and honestly probably makes sense unless rarity really got into comics
Also seems like a reaaaaaallly long section to discuss the storyline of a comic that so far seems unrelated to the actual story. I.e explaining the entire storyline when it seems irrelevant seems a bit much.
In one passage you use up right instead of upright
I REALLY like then discussing Rarity going with spike. It seemed really in character, and realistic and didn't make her wanting to go seem dumb.
The scene with him finding out he could fit through the doors still was really sweet as well.
All in all good chapter. Looks like things will 'heat up' from here on out
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Not too much to say this time. Good chapter, I mean they all are.
Twilight not being upset was nice, I'm glad we avoided that drama.
You used "ya here" as opposed to "ya hear."
Spike's gonna have to learn to stop arguing I think.
I don't have anything against this chapter, but I did find such a huge bout of exposition hard to stay interested in. At the very least it has me hoping all of that comes up again in the future in a more important capacity.
Didn't notice any grammatical errors but I want to choke Button's Mom really bad. Until her eyes pop from her head, and button abandoning video games. Bleh. He can smoke pole.
But that's just my opinion.
Also, screw giraffes. I just keep thinking of that giraffe from one piece.